So this is your first submision, well... it takes some time till you feel your drawings are good, a little self -esteem
is needed too, I think your drawing is good, althought you need to make your work look a little cleaner, try making one
single line insted many lines making a shape.
I'm not sure if this is clear enough, as you can see my english is poor. Anyawy... just keep practicing OK?, I
can't wait to see more of your work.
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Just to post once what kind of drawings are mine (random lines + eraser)... and to submit at least one thing on MT...OK, so obviously it's a girl. I didn't know what hairstyle choose, so I've thougth about long hair but I finally choose the same one that this kid in .Hack Dusk... I draw her last week-end and I know that I'm not good at drawing bodies...
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kyohimura Sep 12, 2005
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Kuikka-kun Sep 12, 2005
Style is good,
The design is great,
but a different kind of scan option would have been better?Keep at it, I wan't to see pictures from you.
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Doji Sep 14, 2005
Great picture for a first submission :)
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GothicMike Sep 17, 2005
Who knew Almina had it in her =p
i like it
keep it up
~Mike
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SilentNymph Sep 19, 2005
I see you have a very soft line. I would encouradge you to be more dareing in the next drawing. Highlight the main features of your drawing, maybe even try a little shadeing. But I have to agree with Doji, this is a good first submission. You have potential, just have to use it ^^
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stellar Jun 23, 2006
i luv the hair the most.
fix the neck alittle. make it abit wider. right now,the neck looks like a piece of twig. ^.^'
but overall i think u did a pretty job with her eyes. xD the eyes is one of the most important part of a drawing. >.<
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Chaz-Anime Aug 01, 2006
Tip for the neck: I usually do my male's necks by making it's thickness about 1/2 a chin's length in each direction.
E.g. if a (whole) chin was 8cm, find the centre of it. Then mark 2cms from the centre to both left and right of centre, and draw a lines for the neck.
A females one is slightly thinner, but not by much.I would advice getting some "How to Draw Manga" books, if you not already have some. I learnt everything from them.
Apart from that, it's a very nice 1st pic. :) Yes, I too like the hair... mine's all clumps of hair, rather than a collection of little strands. A very pretty girl.
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