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Original: Ilona

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Just to post once what kind of drawings are mine (random lines + eraser)... and to submit at least one thing on MT...OK, so obviously it's a girl. I didn't know what hairstyle choose, so I've thougth about long hair but I finally choose the same one that this kid in .Hack Dusk... I draw her last week-end and I know that I'm not good at drawing bodies...

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Comments

  1. kyohimura Sep 12, 2005

    So this is your first submision, well... it takes some time till you feel your drawings are good, a little self -esteem is needed too, I think your drawing is good, althought you need to make your work look a little cleaner, try making one single line insted many lines making a shape.
    I'm not sure if this is clear enough, as you can see my english is poor. Anyawy... just keep practicing OK?, I can't wait to see more of your work.

  2. Kuikka-kun Sep 12, 2005

    Style is good,
    The design is great,
    but a different kind of scan option would have been better?

    Keep at it, I wan't to see pictures from you.

  3. Doji Sep 14, 2005

    Great picture for a first submission :)

  4. GothicMike Sep 17, 2005

    Who knew Almina had it in her =p

    i like it

    keep it up

    ~Mike

  5. SilentNymph Sep 19, 2005

    I see you have a very soft line. I would encouradge you to be more dareing in the next drawing. Highlight the main features of your drawing, maybe even try a little shadeing. But I have to agree with Doji, this is a good first submission. You have potential, just have to use it ^^

  6. stellar Jun 23, 2006

    i luv the hair the most.
    fix the neck alittle. make it abit wider. right now,the neck looks like a piece of twig. ^.^'
    but overall i think u did a pretty job with her eyes. xD the eyes is one of the most important part of a drawing. >.<
    good job!

  7. Chaz-Anime Aug 01, 2006

    Tip for the neck: I usually do my male's necks by making it's thickness about 1/2 a chin's length in each direction.
    E.g. if a (whole) chin was 8cm, find the centre of it. Then mark 2cms from the centre to both left and right of centre, and draw a lines for the neck.
    A females one is slightly thinner, but not by much.

    I would advice getting some "How to Draw Manga" books, if you not already have some. I learnt everything from them.

    Apart from that, it's a very nice 1st pic. :) Yes, I too like the hair... mine's all clumps of hair, rather than a collection of little strands. A very pretty girl.

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