It's more like of a sketch to me rather than a true Doujin. You should, in my opinion, try to remake this and don't rush for you to produce a better one.
Mayumi Azuma Mangaka
Xebec Studio
Erementar Gerad Series
Coud Van Giruet Character
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Artist Comment
Credit to the first page of the first book of Erementar Gerad!
It took me about an hour to do him.
I know it doesn't look good ^.^ . SO , comment as much and criticize itz drawbacks as much as I can take.!.. :)
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Akaiken Sep 06, 2005
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BlkLotus Sep 06, 2005
it is good for only an hour. try to do it again and take your time and see how much better you can do
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shadowcat23 Sep 06, 2005
it does have talent in it but it looks like a quick sketch you should use it to draw another one
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Silvandragon17 Sep 06, 2005
Looks good. It's a nice sketch but I think you should try to shade some more.
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xluminax Sep 07, 2005
Quote by Silvandragon17Looks good. It's a nice sketch but I think you should try to shade some more.
(What's going on with his feet though? lol)I have to agree that it is nice...
Need a bit more shadow...
The Feet are a little off...
And Just add a bit more facial details..Then It Will be Perfect...
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