Hi!
Scan :
Good choice! Were his eyes already red, or did you modify them? Either way, it brings out the villainy in the wallpaper
^^ I think maybe your extraction at the back [err, top right hand corner of scan] is a bit wonky... Not sure, because my
screen's extra dark and all ^^; Also, on the sleeve, the extraction seems just a bit wonky... Are you unfamiliar
with using the pen tool? Because, usually that reduces the amount of wonkiness [Uhm, I'm assuming you're using
the pen tool, because it's probably the easiest method of extraction... And if you're not, you should give it
a try =)] Practise extraction, and always be read to hit the undo button... Don't worry about taking hours to
extract an image properly, because in the end, it just looks so much better ^^
Choice of colour :
i like the choice of red and green for the background, and the use of black complements the character's outfit.
But, I think that you should have used darker greens and reds [note, I say, green*s* and red*s*, because it's
important to vary colour use in order to fully bring out the mood of a picture... Flat colour is boring, unless
there's a specific reason, usually the style of the scan, for doing it] I probably would have avoided the typical
red and green that you've used... It's very hard to use medium red and green together without it looking like
some sort of Christmas theme [which is alright for Christmas, just not the Villainy theme =P] You should try a burgundy
red, use some red-browns... Those reds tend to help suggest blood, darkness and various other villainous themes. The
green, maybe you should have used a darker green, or a browner green, like a dark khaki. Darker green for well,
darkness, but a browner green for say, rotting vegetation.
Background in general :
The mist is an interesting idea, but the problem with using mist is, bits of it should cover the character, which does
tend to obscure the character... Because, mist just floats about *everywhere*, don't just restrict it to the
background, or it begins to look odd. I like the idea of a blood-red lake, again, think about the colour, but maybe you
should have defined it a bit more, maybe just show a bit of the bank at the front, and hide only bits of the bank behind
grass... Otherwise, it does tend to look like just a red mass in the middle. And uh, the grass looks like it's
growing out of the lake... Which is odd.
I really like the bamboo! *wants those brushes* It looks great! There's very little wrong with you using them, I
like your variation in spacing and leaves, the blackness reinforces perspective... I mean really, the only thing I could
say, and it's not actually that important, is that it's a bit blurry. Same with your grass. Be careful with
using brushes because they tend to pixellate... You can probably fix it by going over it with vectoring...
Text:
Nice colour for the text =) The white around it is a bit uncomfortable, but I know it's necessary, because
otherwise, the text would be impossible to see. Also, nice font, I'm not too particular with fonts, someone
who's more picky should comment... As long as you haven't got a swirly twirly font for a villainous theme, it
should be fine ^^;
Overall :
i think that you've done a great job on this wall. Hopefully, you'll take my comments seriously... If not, you
can ignore them, and/or flame me in reply... XXD Misa says you're receptive to comments, so I hope she's right
=p
- Tevi