I think you have trouble with the proportion of faces..seeing that the eyes are very uneven and dont look much the same. You also need to know how to draw the structure of the face better. and also to have even spaces between fingers.Other then that it looks fine
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Just a general Fanart piece, feel free to give constructive comments if you see anything that I could've done better. I believe that this piece has plenty mistakes, in my opinion the hand came out kinda weird, but it could be my eyes :) Anyways, I hope it's good enough to put up on Minitokyo! *waves to everyone*
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toxictea23 Sep 02, 2005
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endsoftheworld99 Sep 02, 2005
Wow! This is great! I know what the comment above me said, but i disagree with her!! I think that the proportions of the face are fine! And the eyes on the girl are great!, I think tho that the eyes on the guy where a little bit lopsided and the fingers where a little small and spaced out. Im not a professional free hand artist by any means at all, but thats just what I think. I like this drawing that you did tho! I think its great! Keep up the great work!
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kagoem Sep 02, 2005
Oh wow this looks good. I just love how you drew this. I hope ya can keep up the good work.
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Emma Sep 03, 2005
I like how you focus to details like with fur and hair strands. And I think the faces are drawn just right. Beautiful talent!! Are you planning on working for a manga because you will sure be an excellent artist? Keep it up ^^
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FutureGirlie Sep 03, 2005
Good art ^_^ You drew that? Waah... I agree with you, the hand looks a bit weird yes XD Looks like he only has 3 fingers and the other 2 fingers are like fins or something, anyway, you did a very good job. Maybe vectoring it would make it clearer ^_^
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