Another great drawing! ^^ well, even if it is only a sketch it is really detailed and the shadings are really well done. I adore the little ghost, I want one! *takes it and runs away* XD I like the design of Siren and the symbol on his face, the only thing I don't like is how the sleeve ends :x but as you said is only a sketch, ne? Evanrued is the one I like the best, her expression is really cute, and I think her eyes are kind of cute too, as well as her hat! and lovely hair! Reva Adune is kind of scary with the black circle on her right eye and the other eye missing OX and she definitely looks determined ;) the only thing I don't like is the peaks at the bottom of her shirt :x look kind of weird and she has really pretty hair ^^ Overall, it is a really nice drawing ^^ Hope to see the finished version soon! Keep up the great work!
Artist Comment
I know that there are a lot of small errors in this one. But, for one, my hand was bothering me while doing this one. lol and two, this drawing though shaded and such, is nothing but a sketch to me. Anything in it can and may be changed later on. The aspects of it I may change are mentioned below. (Things such as costumes for characters etc could be done differently as well)
"But Evan, I've never seen these people before.." I know this ^_^
They're from Evan's manga/comic. from left to right are:
Siren Evanrued Reva Adune
Siren: He is the son of Reva. lol. He has a big infatuation with Evanrued, and I symbolized that with his hand around her arm. Quite innocent really. His eyes didnt turn out like I wanted. But as I said, hand was bothering me.
Evanrued: Getting something strait...its not me! >_< lol. I kinda dont like her eyes either. But I blame my hand for that. She turned out a little bit like I wanted. She is in the middle for a reason. Story wise. ^^;
Oh, and that little ghost you see in between Reva and Evanrued. Long story short, Evanrued and Raven (someone I'll mention more about later) teamed up to forfil a legend which had something to deal with souls. So they learned magic, stole souls, and kept them in crystal balls. Thousands upon thousands of souls are in Evanrued's crystal ball, and so many infact, she cant supress them all the time. So, she has Ghost ^_^; He basically seals them temporarily, but when he comes off. Ah, woosh? XD
Reva Adune: She is Siren's mother. She is immortal, and the queen of time. Was killed by Morgan (king of time) in a
battle that started with betrayel and greed. Yes I know one of her eyes is not there, I was going for an expression of
"determination". I think I got it.
Only immortals can kill eachother. XD
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pegassuss Aug 22, 2005
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pamelaho Aug 23, 2005
Hah, you call that a sketch?! You're insane!! Anyway, I still like "Poise and Patience" more than this one. But this one is quite nice too!! Haha, I thought that was you before I read your little memo XD
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ayanechan Aug 23, 2005
i'm not exactly sure whether i should be picky and comment on almost every little thing since you blamed your 'hand' and is quite well aware of the mistakes you made but i'll do it anyways n_n just turn a deaf ear (eye?) if the comment starts to sound (look?) irritating :3
the eyes could have more 'character' + shape to convey the character's feelings a little better. body proportions could be a little more shapely to give a little 'life' to the characters. i think the guy(?)/character on the most left's hand should be moved and put it over the middle character's shoulder instead cause his hand looks like how a girl would hold a guy's arm rather than a guy holding a girl's arm. the guy's features could be a little more sharper(?)/masculine (only my opinion). the middle character looks decent imho. the little ghost thingy looks really cute as well (happens to remind me of a monster named 'ghostring' from Ragnarok Online, the game). now, on to my most favourite character in the doujin. her expression/design was done quite well. her outfit looks really good too. i think her body shape got lost somewhere between the whites (scanner problem?).
just little fix ups here and there and the doujin should look really really nice evan~ keep it up! :3
EDIT: sorry if my comment isn't fitting. you might have your own intentions/plans for the character's personality therefore not doing certain things. *didn't mean to be harsh*
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toujin1 Aug 23, 2005
nneeeee...draw me something!! your characters are always so cute! and i love how you name them all and give them a story ;)
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Hennry Aug 24, 2005
nice doujin from talent artist, i like your drawing style.
i hope can read manga from that character.
thanks for sharing i give a fav for this doujin 7days later. -
Chrono989 Aug 25, 2005
drawing with a broken hand........... it still looks good :nya:
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GintheTwilightswords Aug 28, 2005
Well, considering that your hand was giving you problems while you were drawing it, still looks pretty good. You must have drawm this pretty quickly or working on an uneven surface, they look tad slanted to me (might be this damn montior >=( ). Looks great and I like some of the back story for the characters you typed. Excellent work Lady Evanrued, I hope to see your fisnished manga soon ^uu^.
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YugureKaze Aug 29, 2005
this drawing still looks pretty good since your hand was acting up
the story attached to the drawing is very interesting ^_^
thanks a lot for sharing! XD -
Chopstickz Sep 01, 2005
could use some work on their mouths and necks
and the boobies look weird, espeically on you character,
it only looks like she has one lol ^^;
just some details on the body could use work but the clothes
and eyes and hair and faces are good ^^
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