I still have the same impression towards the building (its too real)
and actually..
I like the chara to be smaller like beofre..
dunno.
maybe some othe people like it bigger..
oh yah I like the Serial Experiments Lain imprinting on the wall ;D
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bigger & better(at least i hope so :) ) than lained v1
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nice backroun
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Nice i like it.
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is that bg real? it looks like it.. but anyways.. fits good.. the text is nicely done.
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hmmmmm... well i did comment on the last one so its my duty to do it again.
excentric_nova is right. the relatively bigger char didnt fit all that well in the end. :P
and she s also lost some focus due to the darker colours, which is bad.i like the new resolution, the bg-pic is so detailed anything less would be a waste.
i d have some comments about the text too but they ll end up bad too i think (:P) so i ll keep them for myself. get lain back to her original aspects and give her a few highlights and this concept will be as good as it gets :)
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i don't really like to focus the char, it was darkened on purpose. well, maybe its a bit too big, but it was too small in v1 i think(the proportions weren't quite correct IMO). and don't keep the bad comments to yourself, i do this to learn smth new (well ill just kill you painlessly and wont let you rot...whoops, told a bit too much :) )
the BG is kept quite real, cuz it was just...surreal... and felt 'lainish' when i saw the pic for the first time & i wont change it. the char is ment to be blended in the bg, not focused... ill try to do smth with what later -
nice
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Cool o_O///...
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I like the bg.
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if the building is too real mayb u can vector it other than filter , make it look more cartoony ^^.
But i think this cool ^^good work
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