well I don't smoke but the female smoker is very cute and I like her cool outfit. Your idea for her pose is great and thank you very much for it ^^

waow thats good line art. hahaha smoking is bad for ya...but i got a fake i.d

DUN smoke........ ;D~! nice one yumi ~! but remember ...dun smoke ;o~!!! keep the works

I hate smoker but as a art student
I have to say it is a nice peice of art and you did a really good jop on the shade

Pretty cool art. Very detailed, nice outfit, great shading, nice pose too. Keep up the good work.

oh noes mimi is a smoker! ;_;
anyways, the shading is nice though not too fond of the shoes,
the boobies are too small n look a bit mishaped
and the bottom of her face is too rigid so she kinda looks like a guy ^^;
but the clothes are nice n the shadding is well done n_n

A girl that smoke? Gah....hehe! She is real bad girl. Lol! Anyway its quite a nice drawing. Hehehe! You don't smoke? Souka souka.

I fairly occasionally smoke when i want to but overall this is a pretty good draw with the sketch lines and shades... Awesome job as always yumi! :P

heh.
nice design for a character. she looks like a gangster of some sort. the shading's ok. at least it is better than nothing.
she's got some sort of a gothic look on her. can see you put in some effort in this. keep it up!

i like her outfir. it's cool.
she looks a lot like a gangster, maybe you should draw some grafittis on the wall^^
nice one. keep it up

ooo yumi smokes!!! sugoii inking thingies and as usual your drawings are always decent :3 and yumi has an art teacher!? :O

Yah, yah, you don't smoke, or else I'll bash you.
Nice outlines, I love it, better than your previous RO sketch. :P
Not bad lah.

sa ~ this is really good Doujinshi !!!!! i not smoker but i really like this wall , well anyway thanks for shraing it !!!!!