Ohhh, another great doujinshi... And furthermore one of Sakura Taisen today, how rareful!
It's good, nothing to say about the proportions. I have just to say that you should try drawing in a much more
fluid way. It seems that you tremble a bit while your drawing, aren't you? I saw that for example with the hair...
Well, it's quite interesting because you've work a lot on the faces and they're so pretty...!
Yeahh... Kosuke Fujishima is a really good character designer, no matter what the others say!