I like it a lot. You want constructive criticism though, eh? Alright, it may be nitpicking but I think it's a bit too blurry and I think it could do without that text on the right side. I understand that the blurryness may have just come from the texture you put in there, but still, I'd prefer it a little more crisp. About that text on the right...I think the reason I don't like it is that without it, it would give it a more open, airy feeling. With the text there it feels a little constrained and takes away a bit from what the original was attempting to do.
Nice though, keep up the good work!