i think her eyebrow is too sticky. get what i mean? it is too straight. but i really like how you colored it. great job on that +fav
Artist Comment
hello!!!
I kinda like how this turned out^^ this time its outlined my drawing with the pen tool so my lines don't look so
skechy, like my other ones ^_^; oh, my brother outlined it for me because he told me to start outlineing it with a pen
tool because my lines never look stright when im outlining it with a pen.
my shading never looks good... just to let you know, all my shading are readom... (I don't know how to shade) im
just guessing.^^
heres my first skech, if you went to see what it looks like, its alot more detailed >_<
http://home.earthlink.net/~ayasal/Orimg014.jpg
colored with photoshop CS
Layers - 20+
hope you like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please comment~
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akari-chan Aug 09, 2005
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dezidez Aug 09, 2005
Ohh this looks pritty But couldn't it had bin another color.....Sorry how rude of me but it still looks nice!!! :) :) :)
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Kiku-chan Aug 09, 2005
Yeah, I agree about the eyebrow thing... it does look a little too straight.
But, the drawing is very good ^^ the coloring is nice too!
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Ayamael Aug 09, 2005
cool drawing, nice colouring for someone who doesn't know how to do shades XP (it depends on where you imagin the light source to be, in this case, there are some all over the pic, so it would be hard to shade indeed... ^^) one thing, we still see some white stuff around the lines... oh, and there's one line in her hair that looks very weird, it stops all of a sudden and it's all by itself... sorta... >.< and yeah, the eyebrow should be a little thicker, and have a little more shape ^^ (as it was on your original drawing, it was perfect)
well, pretty nice, i can't colour at all, so this is pretty cool regardless of the few mistakes, good job ^^
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lunar-angel Aug 09, 2005
very beautiful
Tho I'm not a big fan of pink but it look very good with your drawing
I think you did a amazing job
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ayane-heine Aug 09, 2005
yup.. i agree that the eyebrow is kinda too thick too.. >.<
hmmm.. but i prefer the original copy that is drawn rather than those colourings.. ^_^'
the original copy looks so much better.. ^^
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bbls Aug 09, 2005
very beautiful...and i luv how you drew and colored her hair! and the lines look quite good, as well! :D
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fclubproject Aug 09, 2005
good drawing, the outlines, but i think you're really relying too much on your photoshop skills than your drawing skills, try drawing from complicated anime pics and dont touch it up with photoshop or color it
but the photoshop aspect is very nice, just work on the drawing more
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shinorei Aug 09, 2005
it's really cute, you could turn it into a wallpaper too. :)
i love the background alot, it's quite nice
Doujinshi Comment:
Her hair is practically every where. The pen's tool a perfect tool. :D It makes the work neater. Nevertheless, I don't like the hair, there are too many of them - if you get what i mean. :x -
DarkIngram Aug 09, 2005
Quote by akari-chani think her eyebrow is too sticky. get what i mean? it is too straight.
but i really like how you colored it. great job on that +favI agree, the eyebrow is too straight. I like the background, it's simple but nice :)
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Verbeek Aug 09, 2005
Oo, this one is very nice.
Yep, like most people say, the eyebrow is too straight.
I like the background anyway. Nice work!! -
semanga Aug 09, 2005
very nice dojin i see here from u honey u did a awesome work i like the girl and the bg is also very nice keep it up sweety
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Kojiroh Aug 09, 2005
this looks beautiful !! colors are nice and pale.. ^^ go ayasal !! XD colors are much better too.. XP
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yuiyui01 Aug 09, 2005
great job ayasal !!!! the body and the hair look pretty well. I won't add something new to what all your other friends said since I also think that eyebrow should ve been less straight ..
your drawing and your dojinshi match well togther :)
keep it on! ^^ -
PhoenixNox Aug 09, 2005
it looks good, but the pencil one is better.
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sukie Aug 09, 2005
mmm the colouring looks nice...the art looks nice too...i really like it...so pretty...pink it no my fav colour but it looks good on her!!
great work! -
Iyasis Aug 09, 2005
Woah, that's a lot of pink, lol. Agree with what others have said about her eyebrow and also her eyelashes look kinda thick. Your colour has improved though it still looks a bit...flat? (don't know how to describe it) It's also a bit werid how her hair is transparent in places since there are overlapping segments. This is nice, but admittedly I love your original sketch a lot more ^^;
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joycev Aug 09, 2005
I'm not a person that likes pink much, but for this I think the pink looks really good! Like others have said, her eyebrow is too straight. But other than that its good. The pose the girl is in looks really great and I like the background also.
Its a pretty simple drawing but you did a great job coloring it. Nice job Ayasal :) -
hytokiri Aug 09, 2005
Excellent work Ayasal, i really like her hair and the effects around her. Nice job. Take care.
Live on!!!
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OracleAngel Retired Moderator Aug 09, 2005
Nice outline and all , love how it just fits with the beautiful astral bg and all, original and unique in a way. Great job noneteless! :P
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heavens-Dragon Aug 10, 2005
Oh wowies! That's just a really gorgeuos drawing! She's really pretty and your shading is pretty good! There's some pink hari creepigng out if the lines but it still looks great! Your background is really beautiful too! Awesome work! Keep it up!
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k3r7j10 Aug 10, 2005
it's very pretty and the color was a nice choice imo. i think you did a good job, though i agree that you can still see some white on the lines. oter than that very nice.
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kk-chan Aug 10, 2005
Whoa! You're amazing as usual! You drew this with pen tool? Wow!!! I'm impressed coz I thought drawing in computer is very hard to control. Also, the glows and the color are very beautiful. ^-^
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melymay Aug 10, 2005
Your drawing is beautiful =] The backround is nice too. Keep up the good work! =]
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