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Full Moon Night

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Full Moon Night

By Verbeek

 Original Doujinsh
This item is in the elite gallery. © 2005 - 2008 ~ Verbeek

Verbeek
 
Submitted:
3y 9wk ago by Verbeek
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
671x900
Size:
401 kB
Views/Downloads:
1,038/77
Comments/Favorites:
19/39

Well, I'm still not quite sure about submitting this. There are still some errors, since this was my first CG.
Made this a long while ago (one month ago) I think.
Maybe I'll update it again someday.

This is the original image: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/21432659/
and this is the sketch version: http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/136240/
Still haven't got much support from there, that's why I'm not quite sure.
Critics and comments are welcome.
Please +fav IF you like it.

PS: If you have any deviantART account, add me please XD


This image may not be published elsewhere without explicit permission from Verbeek. Minitokyo, members and affiliates will do all to protect it's members from such copyright violation.

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Truthly, i dont like these guyz. Gomen-ne! (_ _) But, i love the BG, tho. =P

Thumbnail Comment:
I love the background and the falling sakuras.
The drawing's a bit amateur, I think you can improve by practising. :)
Full-version Comment:
Aw well, it's not that bad. But that's also thanks to the power of CG. XD
Keep up the great work! I like it, so favvy. :)

wow you did a great job, the kimono looks great colored
in ^^ but I see a few lines that are a little fuzzy but thats
all i can point out that needs a little improvment, either
way this is definatly a fav for me ^^

Really nice wallpaper...LIke how u drew them and the colors u used..very colorful...and the bg is great..One of my favs

Amazing work! The coloring was done really well and I love all the details. I really like how the clouds are setted up. Your coloring style is really pretty too. A really pretty drawing!

Wow, great job! The characters are very well drawn and colored, and the night scenery is really cool too. Good job on the CG and keep up the good work!

you don't like this??? but it's really pretty!!!! i love the bg...very neat and real...the whole thing looks sureal!!! great work!

wow thats one of your best yet. i like how you did the coloring. good job and keep it up

Very Pretty :D I really like how you did the night sky with the clouds and the wind at the bottom :D

Wow, for being the first colored picture you did, it's really nice. Hahah way better than my first :x Hahaha I'm on da!!!! :x but I'm not PANDAgirl, I'm DemonOfDeath hahah :3

mmmmmmmmmmm
*ben sense an enromous effect put into this cg*

absolutely incredible. the girls kimono looks incredible.
the blue sky looks incredilbe.
the guys shirt has its own sense of elegance.

the clouds look like smoke though:P
some of the line art should be redrawn in the tool you are using whether (psp or ps or something else) because of jaggedness ..(sorry)

still. *great work bows*
keep it up!

aww~~~ >.< i think that it is pretty nice.. ^^
the moon bg and the little sakura petals..
it's nice.. nice one there.. :D

o wow! i love the background! XD its so pretty! :D i like it a lot!

Gah, I really wish I had your drawing talent XD I really like the look of the characters ^-^ I won't get started on the great bg, I love it :D

Excellent draw, u have done it very well, the effects are also great. Keep up. Take care.

Live on!!!

Wow! pretty good work, btw, the bg is excelent, and the whole composition is so good! I like the more clear night scenes...

Characters are so charismatic, so nice! I really liked your style, you have a gret art! congrats Verbeek!

Most of what I was going to comment on is been said, nevertheless, can't help stating over again how well you choosed the colors. I like them ^^

Simply beautiful! It looks 10x better in color! Of course I still like the original in pencil.
You did an amazing job at coloring it. Ususally I don't color my work b/c I end up messing it up. *blush* Definitely worthy of a fave, but with that new rule it'll have to wait. =/
Once again, I applaud you! Well done!^^

Ever: Wow...the colour is like....very well done!!!!

Shadows: Yeah...the girl has...like such a beautiful aura around her....

Ever:Gosh! How long did it take to make it?

Shadows: How were you able to? Can you help us?!?!?! please!!!!

Ever In The Shadows: Well, see ya round!!!!

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