Hey....yuiyui. The concept of the wallie is good. But the girl student and the teacher looks funny. Kinda like they are being squeezed. Hm...maybe you could loosen em up ^_^' Sorry bout the critique. >_< Overall its 6/10 Keep it up then. XD
Carnelian Mangaka
Mobile Suit Gundam SEED Destiny Series
Lacus Clyne Character
Meer Campbell Character
1600x1200 Wallpaper
Artist Comment
hi there everyone !!! how are you doing?
gomen nee for having disappeared quite a time from MT >< ano...actually i was making a new wallie XD a crazy idea
about a crazy and freaky wallie XD
as you may have seen until now, my wallies were kinda magical, or miscallenous ones. Actually, I've never tought
about making a realistic wallie, I shouldn't have thought like that XD
this wallie, was sincerely, my HARDEST one ever, nothing has been kept in his original form. I changed everything, Made
the walls, the doors, vectored the windows, changed the light position, made the ground, created the three students XD
(they were part of 3 images on the original form XD) the tables was hard to vector >o< ( and I still can't
make them right) -_-') ,
honesly speaking, a shitty moments XD
well, the class is a frensh class , and Mrs. Karen is the teacher XD (hope she looks like a teacher from our time cause
her clothes look kinda...old ^^') the chalk writing on the wall "la révolution française"
means , in the france history, the people revolution in the end of the XVIII century.
the three kanjis on the wall means *in the order from left to right * : sonkei, ai,shinka
translation : respect , love and evolution ^^ the three keywords of the france revolution XD
well the story in this wall is about a student in mrs.karen class who is madly addicted to his teacher Xd this goes
"beyond a simple crush" , he's merely obssessed by her image, drawing her even during lunch break XD the
graffitis on the table shows his deep emotions ^__^
please comment, criticize and suggest things to improve this wallie ! everything is welcome :D
I wish It looks good T_T (considering all the hard time i spent on it T_T)
sorry for my absence ! i'll catch up to it soon !
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Criox Aug 06, 2005
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Yoones Aug 06, 2005
Hey yuiyui, hello my new friend, so this will be the first comment I ll do on your work....
hum humm...
*clears his voice*
...
Waoouch!, this wall is, for sure, a productof a lot of work ; you really didn't choose the easy path when you thought about this wall.
the esthetic result isn't really wonderfull so far, because the character are too stretched and that really ruins the scene.
also I can see you have worked on the classroom, now you should add some texture on the desks you created, and you should try to use some filter on the overall background to makes it matches with the character.
another thing : about the lights : you should try to respect the light from the windows and add some ray of light from there. on your wall it's seems like the light comes from a camera flash when we look at the guy in blue, because the size of his shadow is big on the back... but it doesn't match with the other's shadow....
well I guess you understood that, for me, the overall aspect of the wall isn't very good.
I m sorry to be honest like that, but I think friends d better tell the truth, nee? `(^.^')well that was for the estethic critics.
now I must say that I am really impressed by the work you do when thinking about created a wall, when I read your comment it'sreally interesting to see you really try to tell us a story troughout a wall; which isn't a simple task!
theidea isreally great, and I m sure you ll make better wall, filled with feelings and innvation , that will change from the common "ecchi girls under starlights skies" .... ;psee ya around, I hope I wasn't too harsh.
take care and besafe!
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walkure245 Aug 07, 2005
This is really awesome work. XD It's really obvious you put a lot of work into this. The scans' extraction were done really well but they look squished. You did a good job on copying the desk but I think you should've vectored the side parts as well. The quality doesn't really blend in well with the vectored part. Ther perspective is really good. I like the cute details in the bg with the board and the calendars. This is really amazing though. I would never have the patience to create this. Really good stuff~
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SilverBlue Aug 07, 2005
The classroom is nicely done :) you really put alot of effort into it!!!
but there's some problems ^^;; Your shadows aren't right...
If your main light comes from the windows, the shadows should be like the Teacher's..to the right.
The blue haired girl's shadow is larger and to the left...which suggest that the light for her comes from the lower right.
For the guy, his face's lighting shows that the light comes from the right, but the shadows show that the light come from the front.^^;;;;; I'm not sure if i'm saying things right, but the light and shadows were the first things that came to mind when i saw the wallpaper...maybe you can change the shadows???
Anyways kudos to you for having so much patience to do this :) <3
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Lenne Aug 07, 2005
It's freaky that's for sure. :)
Actually it's quite interesting.Puts you in a thought if the scans went through a compression system.heheh....great work! :) -
semanga Aug 07, 2005
very good honey u did a wonderful work here i am proud of u and your work and u can be that too, of yourself. and i am sure we see more wonderful works like this. so i will say keep it up and hope we see more from your great work. this one goes to my fav XD
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chibi-lizard Aug 08, 2005
wow !! i like the concept which you try to portray in this wallie. i like how you create the classroom and there must be a lot of hard work on the bg. however, there's several things which i think you should note ^_^'
the extracting could be improved as there's jagged edges and the character scan look somewhat low quality. try to clean it up or re-cg it if it's reallie bad. and the 2 gurls at the front, the look somewhat distorted and squashed.
the tables and chairs ish good .. but some of them look somewhat blurry especially around the edges. the perspective of the book near the bottom left look kinda wrong too. but i think you did a noteble job with the sketch ver of the teacher and also the noticeboard ^_^'
and i think the the biggest mistake you make was the clock overlapping the light panel. move the clocks layer below the light's ^_^'
nonetheless, overall you did a good job with it and there's still room for improvements :) keep it up !
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macky Aug 08, 2005
nice try... you have sept into the world of cg walling, but could of tips,
1. avoide distorting ur characters.. it makes them look.. flat...
2. make sure your layers are correct (i think the clock is infront of the light)
3. extract the images aliitle more clearer, because they need to fit into the wall more than a regular.
but dont take this as me picking on you... i really like the concept.... :) keep it up!! -
DarkIngram Aug 09, 2005
Quote by mackynice try... you have sept into the world of cg walling, but could of tips,
1. avoide distorting ur characters.. it makes them look.. flat...
2. make sure your layers are correct (i think the clock is infront of the light)
3. extract the images aliitle more clearer, because they need to fit into the wall more than a regular.
but dont take this as me picking on you... i really like the concept.... :) keep it up!!he says already what like to comment ^_^' just follow his suggestions
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THE-DARK-PRINCE Aug 09, 2005
Quote by chibi-lizardwow !! i like the concept which you try to portray in this wallie. i
like how you create the classroom and there must be a lot of hard work
on the bg. however, there's several things which i think you should
note ^_^'
the extracting could be improved as there's jagged edges and the
character scan look somewhat low quality. try to clean it up or re-cg
it if it's reallie bad. and the 2 gurls at the front, the look somewhat
distorted and squashed.
the tables and chairs ish good .. but some of them look somewhat blurry
especially around the edges. the perspective of the book near the
bottom left look kinda wrong too. but i think you did a noteble job
with the sketch ver of the teacher and also the noticeboard ^_^'
and i think the the biggest mistake you make was the clock overlapping
the light panel. move the clocks layer below the light's ^_^'
nonetheless, overall you did a good job with it and there's still room
for improvements :) keep it up !Can't say more than that.....
Great job and nice work...
Try to correct your mistakes....
Hope to see more....:) :D :) :D
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WindAlchemist Aug 10, 2005
wow thats amazing, everything you said you did to it!!
it looks great i really like it, but like criox said, the two girls look kinda like their bein sqeezed >.<
wonderful overall though!
keep up the great work!! -
Esty Sep 28, 2007
This is really really really good! fantastic idea i love it!
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Gladis Jun 10, 2009
Very interesting. Lots of detail on the textures.
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