if i may be so bold.....Fidelis seems to have a cloudy eye. you see the one i mean? there is no border on the pupil, just a greenish blob with a dark smudge. also he has no top lip. everything else looks great. that's just my view, they are your creations. as i said, everthing else looks great just the eye and lip things kind of throw his look off.
Artist Comment
I got the idea for this pic of my original manga characters from a Gundam Wing scan. (*^.^*) The background is supposed
to complement each character:
Day for Fidelis, because he's open and honest
Sunset/Twilight for Lavender because she is suspended between two worlds (Man and Magic)
Night for Loki because... duh, he's a Dark Faerie... (-_-') That, and it just fits him.
I'm still experimenting with my minimal lines style, so if it looks rough, please tell me, so I can improve on it!
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wow...this is awesome! i luv how each background corresponds with each character! and i also luv the expression on loki's face... :D
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Ooo, a non-chibi Loki! Kind of rare to see! ~_^ Fidelis... is he blind in his left, scarred eye?
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Oh, that Gundam Wing scan... I know i know. I got the scan too. However, awesome work you've done. You CG your work again right... really awesome, sylva! Lavender and Loki when they're big? She's pretty... but I think Loki looks a bit... funny... Fidelis has big nose! Maybe you can try shaping his nose a bit smaller... it looks kinda strange... hm... now that you mention it... Fidelis don't have any iris in hisleft eye... he's blind on the left I think?
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very innovative.
really like the way the characters are colored.
perhaps the pencil lines are the giveaway.
still its great job. really like this one.
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Love the idea! I like the thought of corresponding the bg with their personalities in a way. Lavendar looks pretty as always. Your cging of her looks really good. Loki's hair is a lil weird at the edges where it meets his skin. Other than that, this is really quite well done!
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Veyr nice
I like it a lot ^_^
i see no problem with Fidelis'
eye..... i juss think his nose is a
tad big...... well i can't really,
say much about the colors
matching there personality cuz
i really dunno who they r.... but
i still like it :D ....Good Job!!Loves Ya!!
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