the guy is cute.. XD.. lol.. yesh.. the girl looks a little weird but dont know where.. hmm.. nevermind that.. this is a good drawing.. the colour is wonderful.. really like the colour.. i like it!!!!!! xD great job!
Artist Comment
first of all a Thanks to Tama-Neko for the textures/patterns http://patterns.ming-ling.net/
yay!!! here my newest Doujinshi! I dont know why but Im really happy in how it turned out^^ original skech here http://home.earthlink.net/~ayasal/Toraware-no-Minoue(Doujins.jpg
layers - 40+
Time - long time.............
need to go now..... bye
hope you like it!
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Chocosuke Aug 04, 2005
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rythem Aug 04, 2005
uu~~ looks so cute na~ >w< great worl with their expressions ^_^ I love their clothes' patterns ^_^ +favie
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AngelKate Aug 04, 2005
Sooo pretty!!! I wish I could draw!! Wonderful job! ^_^
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bbls Aug 04, 2005
this is such a pretty drawing...i luv the flower patterns on their clothes! the details and colors are so lovely! but the girl's expression looks a bit unhappy. very beautiful drawing, ayasal!! :D
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ayane-heine Aug 04, 2005
oh.. nice drawing there.. >_<
that guy is very handsome.. ^^ the pattern on the clothes are very nice too.. :) -
Verbeek Aug 04, 2005
I think this one looks nice, although the girl's face seems a little bit off.
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Kiku-chan Aug 04, 2005
Wow, it looks really nice Ayasal ^^
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toxictea23 Aug 04, 2005
Could use some work with the coloring and choice of colors. The colors don't really blend together at all, and you've also mentioned about texture? I dont see any real texture in the image..sorry.
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Kojiroh Aug 04, 2005
ohh.. i really liek this one.. i wish tha girl smiled a bit more.. tha patterns are so unique.. yu go girl !! XD
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sukie Aug 04, 2005
oh this looks really cute!!! i love how you did the hair and the eyes!!!! very very pretty great colouring!!!!
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fclubproject Aug 04, 2005
wow, very nice i like the feel of it, peaceful and serene and your drawings have improved, but the face of the girl is off. The eyes and mouth are strange, but voerall, you are improving
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hytokiri Aug 04, 2005
Good draw, the guy is very well done, but the girl needs a little work on the face. Btw the coloring and the effects are very good, but that is normal for u.
Take care.Live on!!! :D
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Iyasis Aug 05, 2005
Interesting doujinshi. The guy's facial profile is drawn very well but the girl's looks a bit off. Her eyes don't look aligned and the left side of her jawline seems out of place. Nice choice of bold colours however some of the shading and highlighting (such as in the hair) contrast too much. I love the textured patterns you've used on the clothing, very detailed.
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Ayasal Aug 05, 2005
Quote by toxictea23Could use some work with the coloring and choice of colors. The colors
don't really blend together at all, and you've also mentioned about
texture? I dont see any real texture in the image..sorry.
well, its textures as in patterns(on the clothes) :) -
kotoko Aug 05, 2005
OOOO nice doujinshi... hmm i have some suggestions: maybe you should use more variety of color for the hair and then paint strokes in it with the pen tool and then blend it in with the smudge tool.. also some more variety on the leaves. the lines look a little roughish... but it's all good. the placing of the girl's ear is kind of off, but the hot guy makes up for it. i love how you did the clothes, reminds me of gakutsou (sp?) drawings! me likey very much!
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Cagari Aug 05, 2005
Beatiful picture.....I love the outfits and the sky back there.....wonderful job Ayasal!!!
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DarkIngram Aug 05, 2005
Quote by VerbeekI think this one looks nice, although the girl's face seems a little bit off.
But anyway it looks really nice. Great job!Just like Verbeek said, the face of the girl needs some improvement in proportion. The pattern of their cloths are nice. Keep it up :)
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heavens-Dragon Aug 05, 2005
Wowies, I've read this manga and it's very cute ^^
Great drawing! I really like the pattern of the clothes! Really well done! Also, the colouring is really well done too! Their expression is really nice! Awesome work! Keep it up! -
joycev Aug 05, 2005
It looks good... I really like the patterns on the clothes. The coloring is well dont also... The girl just needs a little more work. Other than that, it looks pretty good. Nice job
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slivermoon Aug 06, 2005
the drawing looks very nice, and the bg is pretty good too
but the ends of their hair is a bit chunky, not spread out evenly enough
other than that nice work ^-^ -
TrigunPreacherGirl Aug 06, 2005
I absolutely LOVE the patterns you used in this drawing, Ayasal! :)) big smile.
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shinorei Aug 08, 2005
hey, this is really cute and creative. :D hee. hee. i seem to be saying every piece of your work is creative. :D oh well, i should've said, "You've a very creative brain, where do I buy it?" Bwahahaha!
The ends of the hairs are a bit too messy and I noticed the clothes are CG-ed. XD
Night scene's perfect oo. Love the moons, man. They rock. Wait, it's singular. Soo, it's moon.
Oh btw, your doujinshi vaguely reminds me of wuschel's work. ^^
(And I know you're not copying hers. I have to say this before you pounce on me and growl your head off ;) )
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