I like this scan the lighting is ideal, the nice feeling of her hair floating is wonderful sence of being under water. I really love those almost magical bubbles that float past her arm and hand clinging to the one she is holding on too.
About the only things if you can change them would be that white line coming across the girl's right breast and on down. It might be one of the sun's rays but it still almost seems to partly cut her in half, so if that can be removed or shortened even, it would be I think a much nicer scan.
There is also something about the lighting on her right side the images left side. It almost seems too bright since she is underwater and not blue enough to show show her as being underwater, but maybe both of those are just me. There are also some strange dark spots on her right arm that might be shadowed bubbles but being so much darker then the rest of the shadowed arm there stand out strangely to me especially with the sun's rays seeming to go behind some of them.
