Samurai Champloo
Samurai Champloo Series Jin Character

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A doujin of Jin I did a few days ago. I think i drew his head too big, what do you think? I wanted to draw Mugen too, but I am too lazy, so I don't feel like drawing him anymore. I think his skin color looks a little strange. Well, I didn't really like the way this one turned out. XP

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Comments

  1. fooblued Jul 24, 2005

    The head is slightly diproportionate to the body. This can usually happen by working on a flat surface and viewing the drawing your working on at an angle. Try working on a slanted surface or drawing the rough outline of your picture first and holding it straight up and down in front of you, to make sure that everything is in proportion... :) if you are still not satisfied with how things are turning out, draw the picture and hold it reversed in front of a light source... it will help you to see errors that you would not normally see in your own pictures :D

  2. RahX101 Jul 24, 2005

    another nice doujin from you souji. sad to see i wont get to see a doujin of mugen from you, but i guess two out of three isnt all that bad. ^^ the head is sort of disproportionate to the body, but it still looks nice. keep it up. ^^

    i cant wait to see mugen. :D if you ever do make him. ^_^'

  3. slivermoon Jul 25, 2005

    the colouring is a lot smoother
    but the back of the hair looks a bit funny
    try making the ends smoother and closer together
    other than that nice work ^-^

  4. studio Jul 25, 2005

    Nice little drawing. >__> Shigh I def know more people called Jin than even Davids @__@ Strange. Robe and chest looks quite well drawn. Shading is not bad also. ^__^ Good work Sou. :3

  5. kajimamidori Jul 25, 2005

    I think the head is a bit umm ,, messed up *no offense* but the body is nicely done souji ^-^

  6. DancingBlades Jul 25, 2005

    His ponytail looks a bit odd, and I think his hand it a bit too small??

    But love it nonetheless!

  7. sisko Jul 25, 2005

    :) :D XD :nya:
    Hello again Soujiokita!!
    Congratulations for this excellent drawing, your style acquire more and more personality every day, I like very much......
    Thanks for sharing with us......
    See you later!!
    SISKO.................... :) :D XD :nya:

  8. jingjing1208 Jul 26, 2005

    Hmm,this is good too,but I much more like mokona's drawing,cause it's cute!!^O^ Anyways,this one still a nice drawing,you have good talented on drawing,so keep it up!^_^

  9. ameerayoub Jul 28, 2005

    its a good drawing.. the head just looks a bit odd but its a good drawing besides that.

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