I just think perhaps the background didn't really suit the scan too well. The girl in the red swimmers looks like she's trying to not get wet... so it would've been better if they were in the water splashing around. They look like it anyway.
I think there are too many palm trees... you don't see them really on beaches... just on island beaches... so maybe you could have had more water to make it look like an island ;)
Ara.... the girl with the double eyebrows... the one on the left has her arm cut off... the scan I presume? Hopefully later when you get to know the pentool, you can reconstruct or construct her arm to connect with her hand at least... because that's distrubing >.<
i think maybe a few more layers on the girls would be nice like a median and then soft light or something.. to improve the scan a little more. Brings out the colours... what I do now is after my extraction I create a new layer and add a median on it. Then I duplicate that to have 3 of the same layer. Put them all on soft light. The one above the original scan stays as it is, the second one above I hit CTL L and make it lighter and the third one I hit CTL L again and make this one darker. If needed I apply a smart blur to the original scan ^_^;
There's this funny blue patch beside Relena's foot O_O
Anyways I'll stop ranting now ^_^; I don't know anything...!
