It's very kawaii, and I agree to the fullest on what Kitten said. It was done in your won style, and no one can tell you how to critque unless otherwise. As far as I can tell, you did a most splendid job on it, and it's creative too ^uu^ ( I like the flying sheep XP). Such a wonderful job, you should be very pleased with your work and I'm certain that Biri will love it as well .

woah~ that's quite a big difference in cg-ing style compared to the older one. this looks so much better. folds on clothings becomes more defined cause there are more highlights and shadows <3. did the sheep become old..? is that why it's eyes are closed? the little girl's hair doesn't look so messy now and that's a good thing~ great job panda~ *pours lava all over the artwork*

*blink blink* *gasp* OMG Pandi! This is so incredible! You've given me not one, but two beautiful pictures! @_@ It looks sooo much better, and the original was so cute too! I should upload the drawings I did for school (redid a biblical story with sheep!) to show you. Anyways...thank you so much! I feel so bad, I haven't had a chance to talk with you in ages! Your technique is improving so much, it looks superb! *gushes* I love it!

Wowow~ This is really different from your other style of drawing but yet still carry have a hint of it and I totally like it. This is really pretty and so colorful which gives a cheerful outlook on this. The flying sheep is quite adorable and I love how you created it's wings. Pretty~ This is really super cute. A superb drawing. ^.^

Hahah! You are forgiven on the swearing but almost everyone does it so don't worry too much about it. Everyone expresses their anger differently.

I have notices that you mentioned that you have done this one all on the Adobe Photoshop 7.0 and whereby the older one was done on both Open Canvas (Wings/BG) and Photoshop 6.0 (everything else). You improved the programs you uses.

You have improve from the older one. The rainbow is blend much better and the lines of the characters are much smoother. Though, if there was one thing that I love from the original version is how the wings were colored. You used many shading of blue to color in the shadowly part of the wings. I still love the new bright angelic effect in this version for the wings.

I see that you even redid the lines and changed several features compare to the original. Which I love the way you colored in the eyes. It makes the character feel more warm and cheerful. Love the sheep's new curls and the additional feathers. Also love the new highlighting in her hair and the shadowing/lighting in her outfit.

Overall, you did an outstanding job Pandie-sama!! You shouldn't insult your works. It's like what Kitten-sama and GintheTwilightswords mentioned before. This is your style and you should be proud of it. Cuz I know I am extremely proud of you. Keep it up Pandie-sama!! I hope you get out of that art-block so that you can submit more of your lovely works!

Well, dont mind the swearing I know ppl can get cranky sometimes, it is good to loosen up (by swearing ??? w00t)
I must say that this one looks better than the Original ^^ the chara looks a lot more... 'smooth' (?) and also the sheep became lots more cuter ^^ The feather that is flying around also adds a nice touch to it Everything looks much more 'smooth' and well blend than the last one ^^
Good job on this one, and keep up the good work ^^

omggg pandieeee it looks sooo much better now *__* I especially love the way you redid the eyes! The wings and the shading all look so much better, not that it wasn't great before but it's even more awesome noww

it's cute, nice colouring, very light, and soft. This is good!