It's very kawaii, and I agree to the fullest on what Kitten said. It was done in your won style, and no one can tell you how to critque unless otherwise. As far as I can tell, you did a most splendid job on it, and it's creative too ^uu^ ( I like the flying sheep XP). Such a wonderful job, you should be very pleased with your work and I'm certain that Biri will love it as well :D .
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Please read my f*cking comments first before you comment on it!!! I don't care if it's too long for you, just read the damn thing first. Thank you!!
This is actually a re-CG of this: http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/36549/
Yes, that picture was a "just-because" picture for Biriwilg, who has become a very good friend (no, I'm not a f*cking suck up because I knew her way before she got power at MT).
:3 I decided to re-CG this because well...the first one was very crappy (and I was bored to death)!! ^__^ It's quite simple, not much detail because I wanted to keep it somewhat like the original with the exception of added feathers.
The thing that took forever was the hair. I took 1 f*cking hour on just the hair ;___; If you haven't noticed, I changed the way I color eyes.
Hmm...wow, to see that I have actually grown from that piece of sh*t lol
Special thanks to:
the pen tool: I lava you!!!! I did the lineart with the pen tool
the smear tool: XD Yeah, I used smear on this. It was the main tool I used :x
the feather brushes: I found them somewhere ^^; Too bad I don't remember where, but I do thank the creator of
them!!!
All done on:
Adobe Photoshop 7.0
Comments and critiques please!!! Oh, and I'm sorry for all the swearing!! I'm just cranky *twitch twitch*
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GintheTwilightswords Jul 18, 2005
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ayanechan Jul 19, 2005
woah~ that's quite a big difference in cg-ing style compared to the older one. this looks so much better. folds on clothings becomes more defined cause there are more highlights and shadows <3. did the sheep become old..? is that why it's eyes are closed? XD the little girl's hair doesn't look so messy now and that's a good thing~ great job panda~ *pours lava all over the artwork*
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biriwilg Retired Moderator Jul 19, 2005
*blink blink* *gasp* OMG Pandi! This is so incredible! You've given me not one, but two beautiful pictures! @_@ It looks sooo much better, and the original was so cute too! I should upload the drawings I did for school (redid a biblical story with sheep!) to show you. Anyways...thank you so much! I feel so bad, I haven't had a chance to talk with you in ages! Your technique is improving so much, it looks superb! *gushes* I love it!
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walkure245 Jul 19, 2005
Wowow~ This is really different from your other style of drawing but yet still carry have a hint of it and I totally like it. >_< This is really pretty and so colorful which gives a cheerful outlook on this. The flying sheep is quite adorable and I love how you created it's wings. Pretty~ This is really super cute. XD A superb drawing. ^.^
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FlowerDog Jul 19, 2005
Hahah! XD You are forgiven on the swearing but almost everyone does it so don't worry too much about it. Everyone expresses their anger differently. ;)
I have notices that you mentioned that you have done this one all on the Adobe Photoshop 7.0 and whereby the older one was done on both Open Canvas (Wings/BG) and Photoshop 6.0 (everything else). You improved the programs you uses. :)
You have improve from the older one. The rainbow is blend much better and the lines of the characters are much smoother. Though, if there was one thing that I love from the original version is how the wings were colored. You used many shading of blue to color in the shadowly part of the wings. I still love the new bright angelic effect in this version for the wings.
I see that you even redid the lines and changed several features compare to the original. Which I love the way you colored in the eyes. It makes the character feel more warm and cheerful. :) Love the sheep's new curls and the additional feathers. :D Also love the new highlighting in her hair and the shadowing/lighting in her outfit.
Overall, you did an outstanding job Pandie-sama!! :) You shouldn't insult your works. It's like what Kitten-sama and GintheTwilightswords mentioned before. This is your style and you should be proud of it. Cuz I know I am extremely proud of you. Keep it up Pandie-sama!! I hope you get out of that art-block so that you can submit more of your lovely works! :D
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tareren Jul 19, 2005
Well, dont mind the swearing XD I know ppl can get cranky sometimes, it is good to loosen up (by swearing ??? w00t)
I must say that this one looks better than the Original ^^ the chara looks a lot more... 'smooth' (?) and also the sheep became lots more cuter ^^ The feather that is flying around also adds a nice touch to it :D Everything looks much more 'smooth' and well blend than the last one ^^
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frozenwilderness Jul 21, 2005
omggg pandieeee it looks sooo much better now *__* I especially love the way you redid the eyes! The wings and the shading all look so much better, not that it wasn't great before but it's even more awesome noww :D
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Wapy Mar 27, 2006
it's cute, nice colouring, very light, and soft. This is good!
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