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Soukyuu no Fafner: Kazuki Makabe

Hisashi Hirai, Xebec, Soukyuu no Fafner, Kazuki Makabe, Member Art
Hisashi Hirai Mangaka Xebec Studio Soukyuu no Fafner Series Kazuki Makabe Character Member Art Source

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Another doujin i have finished last night. Thsi time, i have drawn Kazuki Makabe from the anime Sokyuu No Fafner.
Time: 2 days(coloring and such)
Materials: pencil, eraser, paper, colored pencils, 0.3 and 0.05 Copic Multiliners
Well, I know I have (again) made some mistakes. He is too skinny. I know my coloring was a little slacked off. So please scold me. Enjoy.

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Comments

  1. RahX101 Jul 08, 2005

    Quote by soujiokitaSo please scold me


    well thats a first OX you know you may say its a mistake, but it could also be your style of drawing. eveyone has a unique style and you're no exception. i never really see anything hugely wrong with what you turn out so just keep at it. i hope to see more of your doujin. keep it up and ill see you around ^^

  2. RainOfStars Jul 08, 2005

    It is pretty good, but you said "scold me".
    So... The face is kinda weird. It doesn't look like the Kazuki I remember. Then again I have bad memory.

    Good work.

  3. cardmage Jul 08, 2005

    Actually, I think the colouring is ok. If anything seems a bit weird its his left hand, but its just me I think. Anyway, just keep it up. There's nothing really negative I can say about this.

  4. studio Jul 08, 2005

    Lovely colour soujiokita. ^__^ The scanning looks much better than before; I like this. Yes he is a little thin, but I luff how you drew the hands/fingers: o______O wowoww.... =3

    Oh, and mistakes can be prevented by doing a rough sketch lightly under the end result. ^__^ When you complete the final pencil work these can be erased or drawn over quite easily.

    Good work. Favie.

  5. jingjing1208 Jul 08, 2005

    I think this one is the best in your drawing now!^_^ I like the color and it's a very good job for hand drawing.^_^ Keep it up!^_^

  6. fooblued Jul 08, 2005

    The face isn't wierd to me, but its a bit of an illusion caused by the hair. See the point in the hair at the top left , put your thumb over it and the face and head automatically balance out. The hair needs to be even around the head until gravity or motion pulls it away, and having the left top pulled up goes against the movement of the picture. And his left wrist appears to made of rubber, give the boy bones!!! Haha :) I love the perspective you achieved!

  7. ramchong Jul 08, 2005

    Hm... as usual, i prefer heavy color..... other than that juz perfect and really nice to see you tremendous doujinshi!!

  8. THE-DARK-PRINCE Jul 08, 2005

    Well, i will say like everytime, your drawing is nice and u did a great job.... keep it up...

    :D :) :D :)

  9. slivermoon Jul 08, 2005

    u don't scold ppl when u critique about their work
    though u'r colouring is a bit sketchy
    everything else about it is fine to me
    nice work ^-^

  10. DancingBlades Jul 08, 2005

    Love the eyes... ^^

    The left arm irks me though... _^_

    Quote by soujiokitaSo please scold me

    --> Whatever for? You did a pretty good job! And compared to mine... erk, I can't even color! x.X

  11. inuyasha-hanyou7 Jul 08, 2005

    What is there to scold you for? You did a great job. :D

  12. fawna-chan Jul 09, 2005

    wow, such a nice drawing! we all love you for your work! great job! :D

  13. daisukeniwa05 Jul 09, 2005

    Quote by RahX101

    Quote by soujiokitaSo please scold me


    well thats a first OX you know you may say its a mistake, but it could
    also be your style of drawing. eveyone has a unique style and you're no
    exception. i never really see anything hugely wrong with what you turn
    out so just keep at it. i hope to see more of your doujin. keep it up
    and ill see you around ^^[/quote


    what rah said.. but i do see a small lil tiny teeny intsy problem.. i think that the hand and for arm on the left are a bit un proportional .. well i see its trying to reach toward the viewer, but i really have no clue. maybe it was ment to be like that.. n e ways.. if it closer to the viewer. i think it should be larger then it is now. now it looks as if its about the same size as his other hand. don't worry about it being too thin. thecoloring will fix it in no time if you work on it a bit more.. lol..love everything else. it kool with me.. it would be very difficult for me to do him.. n e way.s. it was really well done. thanks for sharing. and hope this constructive critism helps you.. ^^..

  14. NegativeBahamut Jul 09, 2005

    It´s an admirable drawing. I don´t know that series but I know a good picture when I see one!

  15. acether Jul 09, 2005

    Wh..what anime... don't know. But good try. Well, yes, you'll improve again! But I like your previous drawings better.

  16. zaea Jul 10, 2005

    Great drawing...your really good...and I love the way you drew his hands.... :D

  17. sisko Jul 10, 2005

    :) :D XD :nya:
    Good work Soujiokita!!
    I like the character, the expression of the guy looks very good and the pose too.....
    and the background blue is great......
    Thanks for sharing!!
    SISKO............. :) :D XD :nya:

  18. Treyn Jul 10, 2005

    he may be skinny, but at least he looks proportional~ it came out pretty well, if you ask me! :D

  19. o0littlehands0o Aug 04, 2005

    oh, it's really really nice! But i think that u can maybe ink the picture. it'll make the picture stand out more, for sure ^^ but it's great neverthe less! i really like the pose XD did u come up with the pose? it's great! XD

  20. cassandraronald Jun 24, 2006

    hmm he might look skinny but i think that it is really nice.
    +favs^^

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