I likr this, keep working dude! You got talent. The squares are the only thing that you sould stop using, just my opinion.

Yeah...maybe the squares on the upper right and lower right makes this pic imprefect...
thx for your advice~@~

Very nice wall for a first timer. *gives candy to echo258* The scan is ver well extracted and the backgorund looks good, but I suggest you might want to remove those squares. +fav

thx for your candy ~@~
remove the squares ah....I will try it,thx for your advice

I like the squares on the bottom, but the squares on the top are too much. Other than that nice work.

wow.. pretty work... i like the square on the bottom too.. the top looks weird... i like the bg.. it match perfectly.. thnx for sharing! (favs)

the top boxes dont really fit into the picture but the bottom ones are quite nice for it as the camera angle is a low one which is from her legs to her head

Wallpaper very nice.

wow nICe walliE!
loOkz mad...da bg LOokz AwwEessomME!
IRiYA LoOkz so nICe tOo >,<!
mAd walLiE ! niCEly DonE! ^^

Wow, for your first wallpaper, it's really REALLY nice. I love the background and just how you made it your own with the squares. I do like both top & bottom, but then the top one just needs a final line. And I see the render effect, it fits really well with your background (although there seems to be two of them in different directions). You did great with this wallpaper. I wish I can do something like that.

Great job!