its very good chloe ^^ best advice that i can give is that next time you do a drawing, dont use pencil crayon, upload it
onto the comp and color it with a painter program or something so that way you can still have the original pencil
version that can be edited and a colored version already on the comp
lol my sister is doing the doujin stuff as well and thats what i told her too XD
+fav because i suk at drawing and this is amazing ^^
Artist Comment
I guess the title should be "If I had a manga, the cover would look like..." XD
Anyways, umm... Ok, I'm TRYING to vector this one. But I probably will never finish it. It's to long to do and
I'm a real lazy person.
The legs look crazy, I know. You have to understand the perspective: it's coming from above with a slight downward
angle... it made sense when I was doing it XD
The face is sooo screwed up! It was fine untill I outlined it! Darn me.
Anyways, everything done in pencil crayon.
Comments welcome of course :)
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kai81220 Jun 23, 2005
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eclair-chan Jun 23, 2005
cool I think it's cute nice work .I like add to favs I like your drawings XD
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evilchakra Jun 23, 2005
great work as always, chloe-sama! i guess i'm kinda used to CG works that there is a certain something i find lacking in drawings. i would really like to see the vectored version.;P
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marcus Jun 23, 2005
Very nice job you did there of chloe.. You did pretty welll drawing that... Much better than what I can do thats for sure ^_^
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GAfreak Jun 23, 2005
hmmmmmmm nice drawing. real good work done here. i like the light effects in the hair i'd give 9/10 :D
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Ephemeral-Garden Jun 23, 2005
Really nice! Your comic would be selling hot if you use that for the manga cover! Well, very nice colouring, I really like the way you use crayon to colour it. Really very nice. Your hands are improving too, great job! Keep on drawing, and you'll be a great artist in no time! Anyways, the chara's hair isn't that smooth looking, in my opinion, you can try drawing chara's hair in one stroke. Don't outline them halfway then stop, finish them in one stroke would make it smoother. ^^ And Hitomi's (Her name's Hitomi, right?) neck is a bit too long. Try drawing it a bit shorter. Well, that's my opinion, great work!!
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tripleG Jun 23, 2005
I like it! It looks really nice! You are a great artist (it is pretty hard to draw something and like it, ne?) Anyways it looks good, plus the legs are not crazy at all when you take into consideration her position and the angles. Keep up the good work!
Triple G
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benjaminchia Jun 23, 2005
wow. you always can color well with your crayons .
its a hard angle to draw ( perspective is always hard ).
don't worry . it still looks pretty good.
heh, it's a pretty fitting cover design i think.keep it up . thumbs up.
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ramchong Jun 23, 2005
Juz only one comment!! This is very beautiful doujinshi!!!! thank you!
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chisana Jun 23, 2005
It really looks so pretty!! ^_^ The drawing itself looks really nice and the way you colored it is awesome! I like the highlights and the shading is nice too ;) I would like to see the vectored version too! :D Keep up the great work!!
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khatuido Jun 23, 2005
Hi little Chloe-chan :)
How are u?
Tres jolie ta fille timide XD
Tu est toujours tres fortes en dessins.(tu es sur tu veux pas je revienne a l'anglais pas terrible?)
bye
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fukushuusha Jun 23, 2005
superb drawing...as always.
the coloring is nice too.
I really like ur drawing style chloe-chan...thx for sharing -
Liz Jun 24, 2005
WOW chloe-chan never saw this one but i love it its so pretty love the colors and the position of the character its great. Amazing work as always
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pegassuss Jun 24, 2005
Nice drawing and nice coloring ^^ The clothes, foldings and shadings are very well managed, you did a good work!
The overall is very good, but I would like to point a few things out if you don't mind OX
I see what you mean with the outline thing, some lines are not clean or straight enough and the position of her right leg is a bit strange from that perspective.
Apart form that is very good, the pose is nice and original and I like the grass you added ^^ I think you specially did a great job on the highlights of her hair ^__^ Nice! Keep up the great work! -
bevy-chan Jun 24, 2005
Nice one dude!!! I really like it!!!!!! It looks super kool!!! Rock on!!!! Just like always nice drawings!!
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Drak Jun 24, 2005
The good, old times when I was the first to comment your works are long gone, I guess ^_^'
Okay, back to the topic: I think the face is pretty good and the legs are nice, although a little too long (even for Hitomi ;) ).
The only thing, that seems strange to me, is her neck: why is it so long? Or maybe it's just me?Anyways, I probably wrote that once, but I'll write that again: it's Hitomi, so there's no way this drawing won't go to my favs! ;)
Keep up the great work, Chloe-sama.P.S. I like Hitomi so much, I even named one of my characters like that (there were other reasons, of course, but this one was main ;) ).
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acid-awakening Jun 24, 2005
Few things to say.... you're not that lazy so you coulda done it
the face is... uhh yeah.. alright and uhhmm
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Jackyl Jun 25, 2005
YEAH!
Another Hitomi! Love it (even though her neck and legs are a little too long).
As always, soooooooooo cute!!!
Great job, Chloe-chan.
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HydeJ Jun 27, 2005
I think it would make a good cover... maybe except that long neck ^_^'
Guess that Jackyl already complimented it, so I'll just stick to my regular ending:
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heavens-Dragon Jun 27, 2005
Cute perspective! she will look very tall when she stands up XD But really great colouring! You got your shadows, highlight and midtones down really well with your pencil colouring! She's so cute! Awesome work! Keep it up! Hope to see a vector! :)
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Nisna Jul 05, 2005
I like her she looks cute ^^=
The problem you had with the face happens to me all the time - I don't learn from mistakes, that's the point! xD - but in your case, she still looks good! ^_^
And the colors are also kinda sweet! ^^;;
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