the ideea is good but the way you shaded/lighted sothe girl doesn't look that good. because there isn't any light that would connect the moon and the girl.
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My next wallpaper ^__^ I don't know if the butterflys fit it but I tryed ;D Hope you'll like it ;D
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Kiako Jun 20, 2005
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Yue-Horrishino Jun 20, 2005
That's so kuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ^-^
mata neYue Horrishino
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kashikosa Jun 20, 2005
It's beautiful!! I just love it!! I've already added this to my favourites.... >_< >_< >_<
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Sunira Jun 20, 2005
The tree and sky are well done but you might want to rework the girl and the butterflies because they're simply far too bright for a nighttime scene. If you meant them to be bright, adding a glow to them would help with the idea that they're providing their own light.
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mYNamEisMimOxxx Jun 20, 2005
hmm ok here i go. :nya:
kiako was right about the lighting on the girl; i do lke the glow around her though...makes her look sorta like a ghost. ^_^'
um..where did these big stars come from? >_>
you could have added alot more stars all around the sky. :\
the butterflies are cute but if you made them smaller maybe you coulda added more? :\
i love your tree...i wish my tree`s were that good. :) also your moon, very briliant. :D they are both very detailed.
once again on your font at the bottum... your name should be like..really small on the bottum and maybe your title of your wallie could be more "outthere"? ^_^'
duno ok well i`m done..hope my advice works again. >_>btw did you use adobe liike i said? ^_^' or ...what are you using? :hmpf:
love,mimo
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mikare Jun 20, 2005
Ahh, the girl's cute. But unlike mimo's comment about the butterflies, I don't think it needs more. It just needs to be smaller. As it is now, it's kind of overpowering and competes with the picture of the girl cuz it's like half girl and half butterflies. I like the idea and it's nicer then any scenery ones I've done so far.... XD
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marcus Jun 20, 2005
Ahh hhhhh such a beautiful wallpaper you have shared with us.. Thank you very much !!!! ^^
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SilentMasamune Jun 20, 2005
The extraction needs more improvement. I recommend using the pen tool because it makes for precise extraction...after you outline what you want, you can right click and select Make Selection. Because the extraction isn't so good, that pretty much ruined the look of the wall, as everything on the left looks quite sloppy. As others have pointed out, the contrast between the lightness from the moon and the darkness on the left side is too great; instead of editing the whole area, just edit parts of the scan that require darkening by using the Dodge and Burn tools. The right side of the wall seems to be in the best condition. Keep up the work.
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sukie Jun 21, 2005
Mmmm....the extraction could be better...but i LOVE the bg...very pretty...the brushes you used was very pretty...great conprehension of the wall...you idesa is nice too...keep it up!!!!
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Enternal Jun 21, 2005
Nice! Maybe the extraction could be better. The background too me is excellent but the butterflies scare me since they are so big, you could try to make it smaller.
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Pisces Jul 02, 2005
Sarasa very lovely! Nice work!
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WindAlchemist Jul 21, 2005
wow i love this one, its so cool!!
but perhaps you should make the text not quite so big and noticeable
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fudgeCake Dec 10, 2005
beautiful! it's SO COOL! great pic.
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pitbull Dec 14, 2005
the pics looks wonderful.
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seren1ty1 Apr 21, 2006
hi! she looks dreamy! that is a beautiful wallie!
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sakurasake1153 May 23, 2010
I LOVE THE DRESS! IT IS SUUUUUUUUUUUCH A PRETTY PATTERN AND DESIGN!
I think the butterflies look good! :)thanks for sharing!
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