Oooohhh o_O Pretty impressive I would say
You did a good work with it ^^ Until now, I think it's your best doujinshi in my view, even though it's 3 years old.
I personnaly would never be able to draw that without a model to help me visualize the scene in front of me^^;;

thats nice of you to give this to your friend^^ wow!!! awsome drawing as always! but this one is even better! love the hair and the clothing design!! wow! the shadows are done awsomely! love it! honesty I don't see much downside to it... great job!

Awesome job dude , a love the lines and the girl dancing is very pretty, awesome.

ow,, it's really nice pegassus-sann,, keep it up okay ~! (^.')y

wow great work it looks awlsome,hope you dont mind me adding it to my favorites.cant wait to see more

WOW Pegassus!!! You have so much talent!!!! I love you're drawing! I wish i could draw like that but anyways Great job!! Adding to favorites

hey pegassuss, i see that you submited another great work of yours. i think this picture is really good just like all your other ones. i like the shadow and detail job you did, also frame/background is really cool. i also like the idea of using those leaves things in the air blowing to creat the wind affect anyway i think its very good +fav. and i like your drawing style.

Oooh. Very excellent drawing pegassuss! ^_^ The sense of movement in the picture is really good, and nothing looks wrong at all. **luffs it** Dress and the assorted jewellery look fab too.

This looks really really really good! I love her pose, and her hair, you caught the flow perfectly! And her shawl, I love the way you have it! Her outfit is so well done~ Excellent work~ In my opinion, your best!

Hi there my dear friend, there has been a long time since the last time I was able to appreciate one of your work, I'm really happy to be able to catch a glance at this piece.

It's really good, I like the general apperance and the feeling of the picture, I really get the impresion that the girl is dancing... it could use a little more definition on the details mostly on the frame.
Btw, the belly jewell is a nice detail, I like it :d

i hope you keep uploading some of your past works so I can apprecate them, I wish I can go throw your gallery sometime later, maybe in a month or something.

i find the notification for this work almost as some kind of divine symbol, and that is why I tell myself I have to post in it.

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............you know what pegy chan? i dont think i should say anything..cos anything i say will not express what i really think of it. how about this, i am gonna fav it *3 times over* and my tiny list of favs should say it all ne

Wow!!! te ha quedado impresionante :O realmente la chica está super bien proporcionada y da una sensacion de dinamismo brutal, ademas es muy guapa ^^ y el marco al estilo arabe te ha quedado simetrico perfecto :O yo... realmente... no se que decir... es una preciosidad ^^ Enhorabuena!!!

oh wow... this doujin is awesome!! reads toujin's post... looks pretty much like what i was going to say (except for the tiny fave list, mine is huge, my mistake for faving a lot of things at my beginnings on MT ) wonderful job!

whee~!
this.. is an amazing drawing.. imo the best you've submitted so far o_O
I really can't find anything to fix
The expression, proportion, details, shading.. everything is amazingly well done
Definitely a fav from me ^.~

Cool frame!!!!
Such detail! (as always! ^_-) I really like the clothing design and her hair! (did your friend have such a costume?) The proportions look nice just her neck looking a little tiny bit strange and the head a liiiitle to big!
I bet your friend was really happy when you gave this to her! ^_^ (I know I would!)

eventhough it was a while ago its definatly your style and you are inproving alot i love the funky frame very imagnitive love to se e thsi colured

Great, she looks really Oriental, that stuff is relly hard to find.

Oh it is so cute !!! *_* she looks so nice, warm and happy.... really awesome drawing! Yeah... it is a veryvery good drawing indeed.... her boedy is really natural and so on... great job! nothing less nothing more !

the amount of details on this artwork is amazing! great job!

yap. i agree with the rest. incredible effort and detail.

very proportionally drawn too.
i really like the girl's expression. she's so happy. and on
top of that she is really gracefull too.
the borders are so detailed,unique and complex.
great effort!
you have done a wonderful job my friend ^_^.
very very beautiful!
Keep on drawing. looking forward to your next work!

First off, I totally love the border. That's some nice design and detail. The flow of the drawing is really good and just the lil details are amazing. The pose of the girl, while dancing, shows your skills of using perspective and body proportions. Her outfit is cute and I love the way you did the hair and her happy expression. *nod nod* You did a great job on this. ^_^

Ohh my!!! really nice drawing!!! I'm glad you have taken the time to upload your past works because it shows how you have gotten were you are now. Again as in all your works I see a hole lot of detail which is great and it amazes me the use of jewelry that you provided for her. Specially the belly detail it looks really nice and the hair shows a lot of work. Once again I see a quite nice usage of the shades and fine line traces. The border you added really completes teh hole scene... really nice job!!! now let us just see her dance some more

Sugoi, sugoi! Great proportions yet again! It seems to me like drawing human bodies is a simple thing for you. Doesn't look like you've had to use an eraser even once!
I love the outlines of her body + the looks of the shawls and the way they move through the air.

Oooohhh! So pretty pegasuss!! I luvvles it a bunch! You have alotta detail, and I like how you caught the image from an 'above' view, makin it even more impressive. Yet another good work from you, very lovely, and your friend is pretty lucky to have you draw that for her! lol ^.0