Original Doujinshi
Divinity
Divinity
By Jormungand
- Submitted:
- 3y 6wk ago by Jormungand
- Category:
- Original
- Official Creator:
- Type:
- Doujinshi
- Resolution:
- 667x980
- Size:
- 380 kB
- Views/Downloads:
- 816/60
- Comments/Favorites:
- 17/24
Hiya~!
I've done this as part of my school project..... thought I wouldn't post this
here 
but then I decided to post it to get some feedback
It's not very imaginative and so typical, I know... 
Actually I was trying to get a cleaner and finer lines with minimal shadings
(restricted myself as much as I could, but still.... 
)
not as fine-lined like I wanted, maybe I should really start using pen
I tried colouring this in Photoshop... and failed
so there you go... another black and white drawing from me
as usual, I don't mind constructive comments so keep them coming 
Oh, and forgive me for the lack of creativity in the title too.. I'm really bad
at this....
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Indeed u lameo hahaha
jk jk .
^^
anwyays, keep it simple black and white, u dont really need to color this to make this look good. ^^
i likt the design f this, but I must say thatthe wing on her right looked alittle bit werid.
kind of looks like a hmm... a chain of grapes.. lolx...
but blah. still like it, she got a nice expression and the sketch work is very well done as always.
good work.
*9.45 and Grade A* for a nice looking sketch.
Wowow~ This is really beautiful. I totally love the idea. ^.^= I love the gentleness in her face andshe has great flowing hair. I like the details in the feathers and the shading is great. I love the way that you shade.
Her
left arm is a lil long but it's not bad. This is really beautiful work. 
Super job!
Beautiful!! ^^ It's really nice. I like her pose and her expression is so sweet ^^ I love the hair, the shadings are very good and the wings are well detailed ^^ Maybe a little too thin and the arm alittle too long XP It's really great and beautiful
I dont think its plain at all or simple. I really do love the flow of the hair, and the seemingly long limbs, it looks really good, and unique. I also love the wings, the fluttering feathers are a really good add and look great. And the ribbon curving around her is awesome, and I like how you shaded some areas of it, it really looks good. Pose is excellent. Hope to see more~Love it!
clean lines clean lines!! u got them! i love how simple this is, and how much meaning is in it...sooooo what did u end up getting for it
I just really like the setting. She's so gracious.
Maybe adding more shadow on her skin and on the wings, it would give more a 3D impression.
I can't see it in full view sadly.
She's so pretty!
i like her face and her hair. Her wings are nice. I agree with Walkure, her left arm is a little long.
Keep up the good work! ^__^
O u evil man. I drew sth in e same context, as in an angel who is naked..and waned to post it with the help of my friend. U jus killed my enthusiasm of sending that picture by drawing this, which totally pwned it..-.-
Haha anw really nice job there... I realli like your wings... they are really detailed... and the hair is great too...
definite fave
PS. I think i like it the way it is...
Whew, I think you did a nice job here .. proportion is great
nice
shading and wings as well 
As for shading... *thumbs up* My shadings are ho-pe-less ^^
Keep up with the good work!
- Celine
Oh wow. ..she's beautiful!
What a lovely sketch. Her body is i preportion, and the flow and shine of her hair is very realistic. It's another great drawing from you! Don't worry, I really do think this is very very creative, don't you ever doubt your creativity! You make beautiful drawings!
wow, really like the pose and the angle wings . though there is light shading but i think that it is good enough. keep it up!
very beautiful piece of work.
Who cares about more originality, the elegance makes up for it. A really difficult pose you choosed, to me anyway. And I have to say you did very well, althought you could improve on the part where the arms start. I love them thought, those long arms that is, your lines are especially elegant there. I like how you played with the ribbon and hair too, it has a great flow to it. And how you got such a gentle face with so few lines.
My critique here concerns the wings. They're well drawn, but it's a matter of personal taste. Somehow they look a bit to heavy, I would have seen something more elegant. You also left no space between her right wing and the body, I know it is for the sake of perspective but a bit more space would have improved the balance of the picture. And to be really picky, her left wing seems to start slightly to high.
But hey, enough critic, your lines are awesome on this, and the composition works
@_@ I can't believe I missed this earlier ^_^. Heehee, her head seems a little bit in front of her body, but it's no biggie.
Awesome job with the pose - as always. You're definitely one of the best 
+fav+
Beautiful!! ^^ It's really nice. I like her pose and her expression is so sweet ^^ I love the hair. Nice
Very nice.Great art work.Love the naked angel.Thanks for sharing
I believe you have done a beautiful job with creating your original character and creating her pose.
The
lines look neat to me and especially love the hair lines (super smooth 
).
Did you get a really good grade on this project? I would give you the maxium
grade for such a beautiful work. I did a project recently for school. It was a
group project and we made it in 2nd place out of all of the other groups in our
class (this is a long story so I am just giving the results). 