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Original: Why I don't have a Wings...?

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Picture with perspective... o.O'
I don't like perspective... :|
Tell me, what is bad? :|

When I draw this pic,
I have a heard song "Broken Wings" from anime Trinity Blood.
Its so beauty!

Girl is so nice... I like her hairs... XD
And this red-bloody eyes...
And?

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Comments

  1. Karolina Jun 03, 2005

    Well I like it very much! :)
    But You could work more with coloring (her dress). But this is very good art!
    I like her face and eyes (soo red!!) XD
    *hugs*

  2. Saikusa Retired Moderator Jun 03, 2005

    Nice birds eye view, and the curls in her hair are really cute. She's adorable :)
    i agree about the dress. Perhaps a few curls/ripples in the material just to give it a little extra dimension?

  3. Fynn Jun 03, 2005


    i like it it's nice
    her face is very good
    i dieslike perspectives too
    Fynn

  4. tuxedotservo Jun 03, 2005

    Those red eyes are creeeeeeeepy ^^;

    i wouldn't change the coloring too much - it allows those eyes to really stand out, which is what I think you were trying to do, no? As someone else said, perhaps a little more shading (wrinkles) for dimension.

    The hands could use a bit of work, at least at high res. Kind of fuzzy, but that's nit-picking (you did say to find what's wrong, right?).

    I really liked it overall. Fav ^^

  5. Kimaris Jun 04, 2005

    Her dress...well you got it a lot so I won't say anything. :P
    Well, other than, great work, I love it!
    Keep it up!
    *hugs*
    Enialis

    P.S. Please excuse the lateness of my reply. I was on holiday :P

  6. acid-awakening Jun 04, 2005

    the eye colour makes it live
    but it doesn't match with the other colours so it could use more colouring
    the rest is kool
    thanx for sharing
    L8az

  7. Renor Jun 04, 2005

    Hmm... if you hate perspective maby you should leave it alone? Cuz' your definitly not good at it.

    Obrazek zly nie jest - ale perspektywa faktycznie nie nalezy do twoich mocnych stron. Praktycznie niemozliwe jest okreslenie pozycji dziewczyny. Stoi ona? Siedzi? Kleczy i spoglada w gore?

    a moze ta glowa wystaje ze sciany jak trofeum? :)

    Pozdraviam.

  8. sukie Jun 05, 2005

    Mmmmm...
    i like the greyness...
    very pretty!!!!!!!

  9. ynk Jun 09, 2005

    Ojejku ...*_* bez kitu efektowne :D Podoba mi sie efekt akcentu czyt. te oczka^^ przydaloby sie jednak zeby zdawalo sie ze dziewczyna spoglada na widza a nie jakos tak troszke w bok... no i przyczepic tez sie powinnam do cieni... ale sie nie przyczepie^^ bo mam za dobry humor... ladna klimatyczna pracka^^ bravo^^

  10. MizuKochan Oct 08, 2005

    Sexy girl ;)
    i love her so much :D
    Great work Rion :D
    kisssss xxxx

  11. punixer Restricted Member Apr 08, 2006

    it's a good draw, but i think u could blur the pencil traces a bit,the ones of the dress, u know... :)

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