Original Doujinshi
Rakuei & Neosho
Rakuei & Neosho
By old-bern
- Submitted:
- 3y 7wk ago by old-bern
- Category:
- Original
- Official Creator:
- Type:
- Doujinshi
- Resolution:
- 1,692x2,301
- Size:
- 476 kB
- Views/Downloads:
- 244/11
- Comments/Favorites:
- 6/6
okay, this is a sorta like a manga, i guess. just something funny i wanted to do. i don't expect an award or nothin, i just put it up for comic relief ^_^ sorry if its a bit sketchy. i know there is some problems with it, but i didn't want to erase too much, cause then i might screw some thing up. well i hope you like it anyway! i know i'm gonna get a good talking to from evanrued, but oh well. ^_~
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Hahahaha! That's soo cute! Great idea! Excellent job, a fav for sure!
Lets see...
The first scene with them going towards eachother..Neosho should have his hair fixed a bit, it overruns his neck. And her head looks bigger then his.
Second scene where they are about to kiss..Neoso's head his a bit too big, and his chin goes down too far. her bangs could be better.
Scene when they realize what they are doing is good.
And the final scene, looks good, Neosho's hair looks abit too poofy, makes him look kinda scruffy. And, her skirt, the way it flares up, that should be lengthened a bit. And his hand/paw reminds me of a reptiles foot. I would fix that a bit too because it doesnt look right.
I'm done ^_^
This looks good!! Honestly It looks like manga!!!! I just can't wait till you do the real thing!! Also I can't beleive they were gonna kiss>_< HAH HA HAHA haha!!!
^-* Keep working dear! Better and better! Just watch those darn proportions!
Very cute!!
Nice drawing. 
i think you should add some shades.
I agree also with Evanrued. Neosho's hands in the last scene needs to be changed.
Keep up the good work!
:snickers: god...I should make you do another scene of this...oooh ooh I have one..but anyway oh yeah..good job....god that is hilarious.....lol I can sooo imagine them doing that....lol