Horrible? I think you are exaggerating. This drawing is as beautiful like your others. The only problem might the shoulder. But it doesn't lose its beauty - the kimono pattern is nice too.
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okay...this is one of those 'should never see the light of day drawings'...why u may ask? well...there is just something horribly horribly wrong with this and i just cant seem to fix it!! its driving me insane! i drew this pic last year and i kept trying to change it so that im happy with it...but i have finally given up...tell me what u think ne?...damn drawing...>mumble<
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harakiri May 25, 2005
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bucket-shot May 25, 2005
Hehe~ I agree with harakiri. XD It's not so bad - the only problem is the shoulder (the line is too long, I think? and too thick closer to the top [at the side/base of her neck]..). That, and the fact her bangs remind me of Relena Darlian (gundam wing ^_^'), heh. Still, I adore the detail in her kimono (and the ropes in her hair)~<3 <-has absolutely no patence for little patterns. XD The border reminds me of christmas holly.
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KireiLee May 25, 2005
this is great. it doesnt need to be changed at all love. keep up the great work
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kara May 25, 2005
Ooo I really love the kimono! But her eyes look a bit strange? Hmm... I guess it's just the angle. I agree with the neck thing but a really beautiful drawing!
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Susan-chan May 25, 2005
it's really nice drawing:) the clothes is well-detailed and the hair is so nice-looking:)
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kashikosa May 25, 2005
Well... the shoulder does look a bit strange, still it's a remarkable piece of work... The kimono is beautiful, the woman too... you shouldn't say that it;'s bad or anything like that!!!!!! ;)
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pegassuss May 25, 2005
Lovely drawing! ^^ The shadings are great and the details are amazing! the clothes are so beautiful! and the hair is just awesome! I love the hair and the detail ^^
mnn but maybe the shoulder is too long, you can see that but lining up the nose and the shoulder, it's a bit forward ^^ and maybe the eye is a bit weird, but is nice ;) anyway, this is a very beautiful drawing and you did a great job!! Keep it up! ^^ -
Revan Retired Moderator May 25, 2005
Aside the shoulder/neck everything else is very nice... you drew the hair really great and the kimono is beautiful, lots of detail... and her face, it's awesome!!! the traces are nicelly done and also the shading :D
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glassreflection May 25, 2005
you matched the title with the facial expression perfectly. there's so much concern an uncertainty...or at least that's what i see from that. i really like the shading and the flow of the hair too. keep up the beautiful work!
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Siri May 25, 2005
well like all your other works
this is
beautiful
^_^but as for the something horrible that you just can't fix i know what you mean! omg its frustrating and you come back so many times but it just still doesn't look good
i think yeah the bare shoulder although gorgeous and hard to notice but is actually a bit too long? o.O? or maybe at least doesn't quite connect to the neck that high
and maybe her eye is a bit too long
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i dont know either
O.O;;;;
*stares intensely at the picture*ahhhhhhhhh hell its beautiful lol!
i look forward to every one of your submissions ^_^
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slivermoon May 25, 2005
this is a really good drawing as always
the details in the kimono are very pretty
nothing seems wrong to me
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Ayamael May 26, 2005
you're hard on yourself toujin... this pic is awesome, not perfect, but still awesome... the shoulder does look a little weird, maybe coz it starts so high on her "neck"... the her hair is really thick at the bottom (okay, that's just me being jealous of thick hair XD) but all the details look cool... great job!
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HikyuuTera May 26, 2005
Toujin-san or should i say Toujin-sama cause this doujin is very good I love it.I like how you made the hair and the clothing as well as her face I'm sorry but everything is very well detailed and I honesty don't know why you would want to change it btw it's been a long time since I saw any new art of yours please post up mosre because this is very beautiful *wishes she had that talent*
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Evanrued May 26, 2005
I think the upper shoulder, hand, and chin are what's bothering you. If fix the chin, the shoulder, and maybe make the hand a bit bigger it may look better. The hair is perfect and I love the shading on it. The eyes are good too, and the hair pulled back is awesome. Keep up the exellent work!
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MOnTieL Mute Member May 26, 2005
beautifull work...........great......very great.......FaV+......
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DarkSavior May 26, 2005
Hey! Nice work ^_^ I like this one alot so I have to add to my favorite. You got skills, keep it up and one day everyone will know who you are... that is, if you want ^_^'
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GintheTwilightswords May 26, 2005
For something that went horribly wrong, it sure looks pretty XP. The detailing and designs on the clothing is excellent, and I luve the expression on the girls face. Hey...how'd you managed to uplaod this, I thouth you didn't own a scanner and you would be out of school by now o_0? Anyway, stellar work for something that was supposed to be flawed, Toujin
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Eve May 26, 2005
Drawings like this should totally be recognized!! Argh! ><
You know what else I hate? People sticking vectors in Doujinshi.
But they honestly should make room for this, why isn't this one getting more fave?! *bez angry*
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halcyonTwilight May 26, 2005
Oooo...this one looks more anime-y than your other drawings, the the big eyes and all. Like what has been said, the shoulder is the main prob, but i love the gir;'s pose and the patterns on the kimino :) The hair rocks as well too...nice work smoothing it out and giving it some light highlights.
As always, awesome work ^_^
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DarkMaiden1369 May 27, 2005
oh wow love it her expression is so sad..
and the detail in her clothes well the part
you can see lol and teh hair looks great too ><
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acid-awakening May 27, 2005
The head looked really nice and so does the clothes
the eyes i think is too wide and the mouth is way too small
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minimouzo May 27, 2005
I'm looking the full view and i must say it's kind of "royal" or majestuous. It reminds me some queen of a rich kingdom ^_^ Dear, the work on the hair is so great. The highlights in it are incredible. It is so smooth ... it looks real.
I love the "cord" (sorry i don't know the word in english) in her hair. I love how you made the feather and all the detailed lines in the cord. You're really paying attention at a lot of details.
As for the eye, i don't think it's weird. It's nicely done. I agree with the others reagarding her shoulder. I remember a tip from vampyre which could help you to arrange it. It's looking yourself in the mirror doing such pose. i think that here the line of her neck should disappear behind her hair and the the line of the shoulder should be more flat.
Except this i don't think it's a ugly drawing ; not at all. There too much great things on it ^_^
Lol ; i imagine the number of wonderful art pieces on your comp that you don't want to submit here ^_^
what you do is great ; don't doubt about that too much ^_^ -
Norimune Jun 24, 2005
"what do you see in me?" well, I see a sexy shoulder for starters :)
as always the details on her hair and dress are awesome!!!
the neck shoul be longer and the shoulder-line shoul be a little bit up, the rest is great!
her expretion of shy sadness is very well represented to...
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GaiJiN Sep 16, 2005
You sure drew a lot these last months (I can't have enough anyway):
Well this shows how great style can cover up for big mistakes. When you think a bit, the shoulder looks indeed completely wrong, but when you look at the whole thing, it doesn't even shows. That's pure talent, believe me XD ! I like the concept, and beside that mistake, the execution is great too. You smudged the shades on the hair this time, you really managed to get a feeling of softness and volume with your pencil. Haha, no matter how you look at it, the picture still works :)
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