Finally, I finished working on another submission XD
I got this scan here in MT, from paladin3056
After debating with myself what background to give them, I decided to give them a field background therefore the wide
spread of grasses.
Took me 5 hours to finish (plus extraction) and this is my first time using stock photo :D
Oh, this wall also has the most layers ever used so far, I think it is 40++ layers, not including the merged ones...
Yeah, the church is stock photo, and some of the sky as well (the right cloud part)
Brushes used are standard brushes from PS7
Any criticisms are welcome as usual, and constructive comments would be best :)
Hope you guys like this wall :)
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The green glow on the scan was there in the original, I have no idea how to fix it >.< anybody can help?
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Pretty ... it gives a very relaxed feel. Yeah the background does seem a bit empty ...but then ... it's field type wallie so I guess you can't really do much. As for the green thing .. maybe you could select all the green parts through colour range, and then kinda like .. colour the green parts in? Dunno ...
But overall, good job!
wow very nice pic i liked so mush
nice work tareren i liked so mush
:) :D XD
Great BG perspective. The whole colour schemes pastel right? Unfortunately I can't tell you why but the main picture (the girls) doesn't seem to match the BG. Perhaps the BG needs to be darker or more contrasted.
It looks so simple and yet so peaceful. A very good work tareren-chan! The 2 girls make me smile ^__^ really nice!
the wall is very good, the background give us the sensation of serenity, keep sending. live on!!!
Simple wallpaper~ But the best wallpaper i've seen from you~ Very good job on the grass~ It looks so natural~ And the clouds too~!! Well, like you said, the green glow is weird.. Maybe you can try using Clone Stamp tool and fix it up a bit?? Anyways good job~!! ^^
Mm... the perspective doesnt quite feel right IMO. I really like the concept, the field indeed looks pretty cool, and the characters fit well... but the way the horizon cuts off right at the church doesn't feel right to me. I think it doesn't feel like a hill to me since the horizon line is too flat? I'd suggest creating a little bit of a swell to simulate a terrain not quite so flat. And really faded grey jaggy hills/mountains far in the background would go a long way to creating some depth to the terrain (maybe cut the opacity of such to a lower value to simulate the blurriness of that much distance?)
Not that I know much about CG, so feel free to ignore anything that I've said :sweat:
nice scan and nice design.
Although it lkooks rather simple.
But i think it'm liking it.
Overall XD nice wall ^^
wow !! nice :D i love the concept that you portrayed :D the scan ish pwettie .. and the bg scene ish too.
but yeah .. the greenish part ish kinda disturbing. try to get rid of it like what anji suggested .. if not ..
you'll have to re-cg it >.<
the grass .. it kinda lack life .. try mixing a slighly darker green with this green for those at the front. and try to
cover up the ground too
the grass by the building ish a lil too big. use a smaller brush for the back. oh .. maybe you could use a darker green
for the grass awound the building for shades ^_^'
the sky ish pwettie .. so overall .. nice work :D
umm the two chara are soo cutem but why the inside glow in the chara, also the grass on the building is a little bit longer just a thought.
overall it's a good wallie. i like it :)
Must remember to copy/save what I write next time so that I don't have to rewrite these things :cry:
Quote by tarerenHey, thanks for the comment there XD but I was not planning to make a hill you see, it was just a field, a widespread one at that ;) the horizon doesnt really cut off at the church, it is somewhere behind it (not too far away) cos the church is not really at the tip of the grasses, erm, was trying to create the impression that it was as far as we can see from here >.< Erm, maybe you were right about creating mountain, was debating with myself whether to create it or not cos it might destroy the whole feel of the background :) nonethless, thanks for the comment you gave, will try my best to do better next time :D
You're certainly welcome for the comment, not sure if it came across, but I do overall like the wall, but I prefer
to post critique to maybe help :D
Hm... I guess I see your point about the concept, since I didn't specifically know that you were going for a flat feel to the plains. I think the reason that I felt it was the crest of the hill can be broken down to two things, though since I you'd probably want to look at pictures or paintings to find out how to get the complete flatness of terrain. Though... are you looking for realistic plains or a idealized version of plains? If the former, there are some rolls and such even in really flat plains, so you should be able to do some easy fading/shading and foreshortening to get the distance feel to the horizon line. If the latter? I don't have such a good idea... hmm. Anyway, the two things that I think made me believe there was a hill:
reason a: the church. This is a combination of a couple things, but in short, because the church is both close to the viewer (by its size), and the horizon line, we have to conclude that the horizon line is also close to the viewer. Unless you have an assumed depth (hidden from view by a hill or such), I think we need a little more grassland for us to see beyone the church...
reason b: the grass. This is a little more telling. I can see some strands of grass mixed with the sky on the horizon. Again, since I can see details on the horizon, I assume that it is close.
Maybe... instead of looking for grassland pics or paintings, you could gain inspiration from ocean pictures? It sounds like that is the kind of feel that you are looking for; an ocean of grass. Obviously you ignore the waves (except for the telling on the amount of detail you need for the grass), and water lighting effects, but it might give you an idea on how to get that distance feel since I am having trouble envisioning a way to do so -_-
And finally, I'd like to say that I really do like this wall. In fact I probably wouldn't be picking on it so much if I didn't XP Sorry, I tend to be somewhat perfectionist. Anyway, please keep that in mind and share more of your walls with us in the future XD
I like The Girl.... so beautiful.............
Very nice scan, Two pretty girls :)
The church looks very nice but the grass could maybe use more variety in colour and it kinda stops near the bottom. Most
of the clouds look great apart from that one bit near the middle top.
Great work though. Keep it up!
lol.. awww. they look so happy together. XD
the stock picture backgound looks great to go this this one.
nice wallie tarerenpanda. :)
*9.4 and Grade A* +fav for a happy looking nice wallie.
ok wow..this is the first time i ever 'wow' on your submission (doesnt mean the others are bad but this one is
very something!)
nice extraction. nice background, grass, and the scan.
tho i'd like to add: the grass's too bright for me, maybe make it a little darker...the grass also need some
volume to make it not too plain. the sky is good but once again, too plain, make the area above to be a little
darker.
the church is ok but it need some fix but i forgot what to be fix, i'll post later
overall, its very good!
9.5/10
you've push your limit to your best ^_^ i love it and keep it up
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Wow it looks really great!
the girls looks cute together
the bg is very nice also
such detail...its very beautiful work! ^_^
Really pretty! ^^ The scan is so beautiful! They seem so happy :) They look like twins ^^ just like me and my twin sister ^^ hehehe. The background is so nice! it fits really well. The whole scene is lovely. Great job! Keep it up! ^^
Ahh... nice ^.^ Love the simple feeling of happiness that flows from this wall. You did a great job with the grass field and integrating the church photo, and the clouds look amazing except for a "splatter" in the middle which looks a bit odd. But, very nice job! ^.~
what a kawaii wall.
looks really calming n sunny ^^
very simple colours yet very soft n nice to look at
I love the grass u made n the church as well..it goes really well with the light blue sky
the girls r very cute too ^^
*favs*
cute!!!! I like this. I like the church in the field. It makes it very interesting. I like the girls and how they are standing. The twins are cute.
de tres jolie jumelles ^o^
very nice wallpaper.
imho the church is kinda out of place there but maybe the wallie wouldnt look as nice without it :P
but great job ^^
nice. fav
So nice to see happy young girls laughing and smiling and being so free. The background is wonderful....and even though I am very spiritual, I think I would have made a farm or barn rather than a church...but anyway...A great wallpaper that only shows that simplicity can be great. You have much talent. Thanks for sharing it. A+++++++++
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