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Attempted Manga #6

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Attempted Manga #6

By Eve

 Original Doujinsh
© 2005 - 2008 ~ Eve

Eve
 
Submitted:
3y 21wk ago by Eve
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
757x1,000
Size:
499 kB
Views/Downloads:
498/37
Comments/Favorites:
18/11

Alright, here's one with a little more attempted action. (I suck with speed lines, bare with me).

I hope you understand what's going on.. . bleh. I'm not that good. x_x

Thanks for your continuing support and faves! I really appreciate it! You guys really keep me going. ^^


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Wakkkk! thats an ouchy movent right there....Love the speedline sand it looks great!
Nice job Eve! :)

wow really nice.
the work has improved ^_^
composition and detail-wise is really nice .I like the char design
Loks awesome.
overall nice work keep it up ^_^

Wow, like nice save right there! I forgot that guy's name again, the one who swiped away the axe. ^_^'

Ooo, another lil manga strip ^^ ! Maniac looks freaky, just the way he should lol XD . He stands out compared to you and yuor boy toy Hiro (hehehe^^) . Kepp making them, I luv it XD !

whoa it would seem the axe was slapped out of Adrian's hand haha enough is enough, nice i hope i read it right but that is what i see so what's next?

lol... so the manga contnues... XD
good work eve. cant wait to see the next pennal. :)

Yay more manga! And lots of action this time! Teehee can't wait till the next installment!

ohh... another page of the manga...
nice job *thumb up*
looking forward to da next page ^^

Wowow~ This really is the best part so far. XD Each frame has so much going, loving it all. Especially love the way he protects her like that. ^.^

oh man...adrian keeps cracking me up...i luv his "blank" eyes! the characters are looking even better...want more!!
XD

Wow, it looks very accurate. ^ ^

Love how he came outta nowhere and smacked that axe away. :P

Whew, glad to see Adrian is back to normal at the end cause that first scene scared the heck outta me! x_x Hehe, the speed lines are pretty accurate and effective at most, and the action is heating up! Good job, Eve, must have issue #7 of Attempted Manga! now!!! XD

Ohh, this one has action shots!
Very nice, you place it well and professional. ^___^

This is too funny XD I really like the whole road this is going down, love it~

this one is superb too. So much technical points. Your speed line are great and realistic. The way you made turn the happy axe is perfect really. The way adrian jumps from the tree too. The faces are superbly designed with nicely done emotions. Really you're improving at each pages :)

ps : hiro lost again his bandage on the last caption XD

cool...
keep writing...

  • Yoh
  • 3y 21wk ago

That's good this have more action, I think I saw a cat hear in that character! Well the characters are nicely draw! :)

Duuuude....That looks sooooo cool...

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