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Original: Attempted Manga #5

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Sorry I took so long. I'm so glad you like it. x_X

Here's number 5.. .not much but number 7 is in the making. Like I said, you guys are my inspiration. I couldn't have continued it without you! <3

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  1. calisqo May 16, 2005

    ^_^ another manga >.>
    keep it coming XD
    It should keep me busy during my com desing class XD
    Good work nonetheless.

    Maybe adding more details on teh scenery or adjusting the size of each of the block .
    A good manga should has a nice boxing composition ^_^
    keep it up u're doing great ^_^

  2. Kitaan Retired Moderator May 16, 2005

    so what happens next? ^_^ I want to know! great job Eve it looks like a actual cartoon!
    ^_^ I like it alot! :D

  3. aeiifreakazoid123 May 16, 2005

    I say not bad, you're getting better at this I can tell :) ! You're first panal is really great, it's good that I can finally see your hair (it's awsome)! :D

  4. Dragus May 16, 2005

    Hey for a person attempting manga u are getting good and i like how u added that part about the sidewalk and how u show the maniac hiding in the tree hahah this is good don't stop continue the story.

  5. shiwei May 16, 2005

    finally is out XD
    no worry, take ur time... good thing must wait ^^
    looking forward to ur next page....

  6. GintheTwilightswords May 17, 2005

    It's simple, but it's well done. You could stand a chance of getting this publish one day if you wanted to :) . I agree with everyone else, keep doing your lil manga ^0^ .

  7. kara May 17, 2005

    Yay! More manga from you! And it's really good and funny as usual^^ Can't wait to see your next one!

  8. walkure245 May 17, 2005

    Hahah~ This is getting good. XD Each scene has good perspective and makes you want to keep reading. Hope to see more.

  9. Anjhurin May 17, 2005

    yeepee 5's out :) ...... hum one can feel the pressure ^_^. where has he gone? ahah
    anyway nice drawing again, but i just thought that this school was kinda empty eheh. but i really like the way they peek out from behing the tree, with their little eyes.
    and the last scene is very good too, seeing them from behind increases the sense of insecurity muahahah
    btw does adrian have any kind of teleportation power, like in star trek XP

  10. acid-awakening May 17, 2005

    Cool, Looks really nice
    Dunno what 2 say it's real great

  11. OracleAngel Retired Moderator May 17, 2005

    *snaps fingers* im the voice insid eyour head...

    Lovely work girl...cant wait to see more cos the anticipation is killing me....XD

  12. Athrun May 17, 2005

    I forgot to check out #4. :( It was pretty interesting about the ppl going psycho-mode. xd

    lol, stepped on a twig. Classic. ^ ^ Uhh... that IS what the snap thing is, right?

    Looking forward to #6.

  13. StarCentury May 17, 2005

    Good thing I reserved for the latest issue of Eve's killer manga! XD Whoa, Adrian's staking the two leading character's and he's hiding on top of the tree! o_0 Get out while U still can! Darn, it ended in a cliffhanger, might as well wait for issue #6! BTW, love how U joking around about what U consider bad drawing, Eve! ^_^' Makes the manga more funny! XD

  14. maho-ho May 18, 2005

    That well! a new delivery of your comic! this very good, really interesting! I like your style! Thanks to share it friend! OX
    My Fav! ;)

  15. Devilet May 19, 2005

    Hehe, yay! More XD
    hmmm, the guy looks oddly drawn in the last one, but I can imagine it isn't easy, and I think the sidewalk is okay.

  16. Evanrued May 20, 2005

    XD That was funny. Really it was. I really like it, its a really good effort, and good linework. Cant wait to see more!

  17. minimouzo May 20, 2005

    i haven't been able to not comment ^_^ it's so funny. You really are great. You have great notion of using this chibi style ^_^ the school ; the tree ; the scale ^_^ it's not crappy ; it's genuine :)

  18. Yoh May 21, 2005

    Nice draw! The characters are really good! The story is a little weak here but have to continue reading the next ones! :nya:

  19. sukie May 22, 2005

    good.very good...i can't wait to read more!!!!!!

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