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Magic Wallpaper: Star Archer

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Hm... Not in a good mood...

i feel sorry to this wallie... cos i didn't do it the best way... but if i don't submit now... it gonna be history forever...

As usual... Critiscism, Fav+ and Comments are my forces and encouragement to get better!!! Thanks...

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Comments

  1. kyubinaruto May 16, 2005

    Bagus kok! I think e sky's rather plain though... E stars a bit too many... If there's a moon, esp full moon, usually there won't b as many stars. But it's okay.. I did tt same mistake too. One more thing is e glow around e char... i think it's beta if it's softer

  2. Liz May 16, 2005

    Love it love the background the colors are amazing the moon and stars and everything its really cool love the character! great work :)

  3. lanxx May 16, 2005

    Wow!!it look really good....
    overall the wall ,character, background are nice
    the star aren't shining enough...

    nice work....

  4. DarkCrimson May 16, 2005

    Oh wow really nice Wallie from you Ramchong^^
    Great Job with the Background and also very cool looking Light Effects.
    The Warrior Girl looks like she can really kick some ass with this awesome Bow^^
    Add it to my Favs for sure.Thanks a lot for sharing^^

  5. 25chai May 16, 2005

    ZOMG

    The gal is so KENG and yeng, nice gal, nice background = nice wall. And the bow also, I think u should name it Dragon Slayer Bow. ^^

  6. kuroimisa Retired Moderator May 16, 2005

    Hmm... yeah... I gotta say that this one is a bit less eye catchy... I think it might be the colour of the grass and where the light hits it... it should be darker since it's night and whatnots... but it's a really nice wallpaper... *^_^* ((kira kira))

  7. fukushuusha May 16, 2005

    this good...seriously good...the grass is awesome.
    great combination of colors
    the only thing that bothers me in this wall is the
    glow of the character...but a great wall non the less ;)

  8. bbls May 16, 2005

    the night sky is very beautiful...and i luv how the movement of the grass corresponds with the girl sitting on top of it...great detail in that! the scan looks great, as well, but i'm not sure if i like the red outline around her...i think i would've liked it better if she blended more with your background. overall i really liked your background and the scan...they looked great together... :)

  9. kinky-sasse May 16, 2005

    Pretty wallpaper ^^,

  10. Kia-san May 16, 2005

    Yea, I agree with you on this one, not the best. But it still has something that draws the eye to it. Maybe next time you should make the moon a little smaller and less stars...oh, and the energy around the character, make the outline less harsh so it doesn't look like she is being tied up by it. Other than that, very nice! ^-^

  11. sakuralim May 16, 2005

    I love the back scene ^^
    it is misterious and pretty
    nice work and good job ;)
    everything is just nice
    except it's a little bit too bright the sjy
    if it is a little bit dark it will bring out the character of the girl
    hehe, that's what I think ^^"

  12. Angel-on-Dragon May 16, 2005

    I really likethis wallpaper. The scan's great and the bg fits perfectly.
    Thanks so much for sharing *adds to fav* Hope to see more from you ^^

  13. ProfMembrane May 16, 2005

    I must agree that the sky is a bit plain and overwhelmed with stars, but somehow the surrealism that you could manage in such a picture makes the excess unimportant. I like it.

  14. Maija May 16, 2005

    Hey the wall looks good but....I somehow don't like the grass.....if the grass would be in other tone I think it would look better.....a lot better....I think green grass dont go with uniwerse....but thats only my oppinion.... ^_^'
    O yeah...if it would be mars...OR something with clif OR desert....it would look better....I mean the character would go better.....and I think you need a monster....or DRAGON.....It would go wonderfull with the girl.....
    Hope your not angry.... :sweat:

    by the why.....the girls in all your pictures look great!!! So keep up your good work...OK? :pacman:

  15. Lodigo May 16, 2005

    wow
    looks good ramchong you r doing it better and better
    keep up the good job :D

  16. kara May 16, 2005

    It's nice but somehow I feel that the character doesn't seem to fit in very well with the background. It's nice have a sparkly, starry night but it might've been a bit overboard, it would probably look more natural if it was patchier.
    But still, it looks pretty good, I like the swirly stuff around her^^

  17. Kiako May 16, 2005

    nice wallpaper,
    well th echara doesn't quite go that good with the background, now the sky maybe looks a bit empty(now i don't mean that it needs more stars because it has got enough stars but that you should put in something like a comet or something)
    and now when you made the bright thing in the top left corner, well as a result of that there is a green dot somewhere there that doesn't fit in because of its color (and that litle dot isnt the only thing that is the result of it for an example there is a red circle to be seen between the green dot and the big red thing there)
    the effects around the chara are good, and so is the moon in the back, even if i would use a different color for it(the moon that is).

  18. Koukin May 16, 2005

    love this one. nicely done with the archer chick. might've been better to had use a different background though.

  19. Barbara May 16, 2005

    Nice wallpaper, what I like the best is the grass, the sky is nice too but it's a bit empty in the middle somehow ^_^ Otherwise, good work, keep it up :)

  20. belmikry Retired Moderator May 16, 2005

    no- i really like it! :)

    i think the only addition I would make is making some sort of perspection lin into the abyss, from the character to the target point... like a white light line of something showing the area between them- one behind her, towards the target and one in front- I think that would help the images fit btter and give more depth :)

  21. Chobiits May 16, 2005

    Nice wallpaper.
    Seem like you concentrated on the char a bit much and neglected the bg a bit.
    There are a lot of swirly things around the char, even the wind, that's well done.
    But the bg doesnt really fit with the rest, seems like a grass field on the moon, where you directly see the universe in the bg.
    Thanks for sharing.

  22. angelchan8123 May 16, 2005

    Well i don't much about layers and stuff but i like it it looks nice, anyway i like it

    Good job :D

  23. Inferno88 May 16, 2005

    nice!! man but the lens flare is a bit blurry .. also the grass sorta kills the space scene

  24. SharinganKnight May 16, 2005

    wow, the overall idea is very good, I like the whole theme. Although I think the character extraction could be better and if you gave the light in the corner a little blurr and make it blue it would look much better :)

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