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Death Scythe

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Death Scythe

By Dark-Sakura

 Original Doujinsh
© 2004 - 2008 ~ Dark-Sakura

Dark-Sakura
 
Submitted:
4y 21wk ago by Dark-Sakura
Category:
Original
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Type:
Doujinshi
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Views/Downloads:
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Comments/Favorites:
27/23

Yeah done it in 3 hour, was in hurry so there are some mistake. Anyway give as much as critic, advice.... as you can ^_^

PS : Oho it\'s already 3 am, shit... have to work at 6 :D


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hand needs some work, but other than that, its REALLY good :)

  • XianPu
  • Banned Member
  • 4y 21wk ago

Feet look dispropotinant (sp?), otherwise it is indeed one bad ass drawing.

Awesome detailing and shading as usual. I really love the extra time you put into the staff. Now that I know those are ribbons, maybe make them more flowy by curving/rounding the fold in the ribbons? Other than that, man you art is always wonderful to look at. Hope you got some sleep before work :)

  • Meg
  • 4y 21wk ago

looks cool. gotta love the details *_*

Hey this look cool i can't really see what she is sitting on(just a ball?)and the circle on the bottom of the staff kind of wierd. Confusing I think, it would look great in colour....

looks awesome^^ love the detail^^ and that scythe.... *drool*

oh my god it is beautifull....

Wow, I'm starting to really love your work! Beautiful, beautiful drawing.

Quote by tarigwaemirWow, I'm starting to really love your work! Beautiful, beautiful drawing.

ha ha I've already fell in love with it! XD XD XD
It's awesome! I love how you draw!! Your shading and draping is how good!

nice design! but if u wan some critics, i can give u.
"hands" draw doesn't look good, cloths layer too confusing n wrong effects, the "ribbons" should be more smooth n soft. The "things" under her or she holding is really "unclear" 4 me, girl's pose got little wrong, half of her upper body should not be so straight. Arr......sorry...give too many critics...hope u don't mind. but ur idea is nice.
Next time if i post a sketch...critics back 2 my work....then we wil learn more.

i really like it! keep up the good work

Oh you big squiggly baffooon! XD You keep on improving, which is excellent. No flaws, apart from this - her right hand is a bit small, and her left hand needs a wrist =\

Otherwise - YOU OWN!

Man, you are so good! You outline the character and the whole pic so well. I haven't seen any real mistakes. It's perfect in my eyes.^_^

Awesome- the folds of the clothing and weapon are very well done. Excellent!

O.o awesome weapon ^_^

But what is she sitting on?

amazingly detailed, just...what the $%@ is she sitting on? ^_^'

ehhh.. not too bad for a 3hr job :hmpf: nah just kidding great work!

erm... you know my opinion about your work: publish an artbook!

The head is somehow wrong... but it is still great! ^^

i think the fringe of hair has a little strange. i think the hand is one the most difficult part !

we should practice it more times

the whole modeling is very good!

i like it very much

Cute and deathly this mix exit me very much. XD

All the usual goodness rolled up into a piece of paper. Like the style and detail.

Nice one..
I like that..
*i wonder when can i draw like that.. :sweat: *
Thanks for sharing..!
^_^

:o That looks very awsome

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