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Original Doujinshi

Ari

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Ari

By Siri

 Original Doujinsh
© 2005 - 2008 ~ Siri

Siri
 
Submitted:
3y 23wk ago by Siri
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
820x1,430
Size:
273 kB
Views/Downloads:
275/17
Comments/Favorites:
6/9

lol i'm sorry its so light =.=
i just scanned it in
and i have no imaging programs any more except for what.. paint
lol
n i'm not sure about how to adjust my scanner...
well any way sorry =/
this one might look a bit wierd any way
i made so many changes to her
including rubbing out her head lol coz her face was so bad originally


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Well, even if her head did looked bad originally, now it looks really good.
I love the way you did her dress (especially the lower parts). Plus the flowers are great.
Once again, great job Siri and a fav from me.
Keep it up.

Beautiful.
Love her dress.
And the flowers are very pretty as well.
Drak's right:
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And a fav.

I think it looks great^^
I like gher expression and pose
very cute^^ and her outfit is
pretty kick ass and I think her head looks
fine^^ +fav for me lol

Wow I love it, amazing, amazing, just amazing!! It is so beautiful, I wish I could fit in to a kick a** out fit like that!! It rocks!!! Hehehehe...........Thanks for sharing ur so talented!!

*huggles siri*

great work me thinks! it is really great how u got such movement into it and the dress is gorgeous! only thing tho, try to keep ur lines cleaner...tell u a secret, try and find those dough rubbers from ur local art shop and lightly dab til the whole pic fades, then use a 2b pencil and go over it...its just that the drawing is so gorgeous that i would love to be able to see those lines!

Um... I think... well... the neckline should go right after the ear...
And... well... is it just me? Erm, I think the jaw's kinda weird... and, the angle of her hips are kinda weird to me, too...

However, I do like the way you drew her right hand - lol, I'm not that good at it...

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