OMG it's adorable .
Hehehe, looking forward to seeing more if and when it comes ^__^ .

wow cool char.
Like the girl
And like the bottom strip the best .
The expression in the girl is just awesome .
more ^_^

Hey that's cool, I'm trying to make myself a manga too! Keep up the good work !

^_^ haha that's great. Can't wait to see the second page. I love the way they are expressing in weird situations it makes me think to the little sketches of aoi nishimata when she draws the chibi monkey ^_^ that's cool. Really funny. I especially love the angry face of the girl

It's really good! The story looks funny and the characters are great! Want to see more!

Good drawings, I like much your work!
continuous working!

awwwwww Eve its so cute! Really good effort too. i really like it. ^_^ Hope to see another one! the characters are really cute!

wth is that !! ahah it's so funny.... poor guy, but still this expression of his (i'm not stoned, i'm just sleepy !!! soo hilarious )
and why a gay guy?? i mean the guy pops up in the story like that, it's so cute. i like the little chibi chara at the bottom of the page too
it's definitely a thumbs up XP

LOL That looks so cute, Eve! Even though it's a rough doujin, I still see your style of drawing and it looks pretty awesome for a drawing! The story is funny, never expected Adrian to say that! I said it before and I'll say it again, you excel in drawing cute anime characters perfectly, Eve!

lol.. hahaha, riiight... you are so werid.. jk jk.. ^^
thats pretty funny. so its a to be continue eh.. well I betta stay tune then...
good work. +fav for the great effort. looking forword for more.

Eve youll get your man....hahha love that eyepatch part..so hilarious!
Great stuff girl! :P

rofl! so cute and funny, love the style!
--thumbs up-- moooreee ... *-*

Hahahahahahahahah! Awesome manga, Eve. Great job drawing the characters and shading. Might wanna use a ruler next time for the lines tho.

lmao, this will keep me comming back, cant wait to see the rest of it

This is seriously cute and sunny. I'm definitely interested in seeing the rest of this. ^_^ Eve has such a charm about her. Actually, the lines give the manga some character. So don't worry bout stressing the lines. Wonderful stuff~

how funny this picture
very cool congredilacions
bye bye

wow...i think this is so cool!^^
the drawings r awesome eve!^^ really funny as well
great attempt! if it turns out to be published...i'll be the first to get it!=]

Lol! That's great. They're so small!

haha... so cute.... =P