nice job man!!!, the poetry is great, and the art goes along just perfectly, (already knowing that the art is incredible to...) ^_^fav+
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page three of my "Of Me..." book project.
page 2: http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/101263/
page 1: http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/101065/
reading is the answer...
very first try in poetry in English... does it sound right?
Don't necessarily enjoy, but reflect...
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SaschaC Apr 23, 2005
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RaXiv Apr 23, 2005
Really Dernier, i will make You something really nice when i will got my PC back. You must be credited!
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sukie Apr 23, 2005
beautiful as always...
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shyxsakura Retired Moderator Apr 23, 2005
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saki can't seem to download it whole .. >.< only a part of it comes out ...
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*whacks THE COMPUTER*
so saki will come back and read it later .. xD saki kant wait .. ;____;
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Holt Apr 23, 2005
Nice poem. Brilliant effects on the left page.
Can't wait to see more. Keep it up! -
Skillzpay Apr 24, 2005
The poem itself makes this worthy of a fav :D
But I love what you've also done on the left side as well. I think it's quite different and seems to compliment the whole theme of masks that we put up. -
OracleAngel Retired Moderator Apr 24, 2005
You know that some poems arent suppose to rhymn but nonetheless the whole artwork speaks for itself...great stuff man! :)
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omni Apr 25, 2005
Not a bad poem, though there are some things that could use a little touching up. Some grammatical things that don't look purposeful, and perhaps a little more harmony could be created by deciding on either "I am" or "I'm" to use in one of the lines, rather than using both... (personally, I'd go for the contraction). But pretty good. Interesting abstract you put up with it.
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KnightOfLain Apr 25, 2005
I really like the way your book turns out. The artwork on this one kinda reminds me of "Wraith:the Oblivion" - images intermingling, sprouting from each other - like a bizzare metamorphosis, like evolution at fast forward. As for the poem at first reading i was enthralled by it, but when i came back next day to read it lost a bit of its magic. I guess omni is a bit right - still, believe me, i love your writing as it opens a whole new areas of your art - blending literature and graphics was indeed a brillinat idea - the whole is creepy and disturbing. What's even more important it makes you stop and think - and i guess that's what is important. Marvellous.
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soulas Apr 30, 2005
the poem is .. lovely! teh use of black and white / contrasting etremes is fantastic too . kutgw.
~j
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