jap it looks quit eplain, i think it is because of the colors, but then again.
o well the tree needs a bit more work. and there are some lines there, i don't know why. and the sign maybe needs
more work too. well i don't wanna be to critical so i'll stop here.
btw it doesn't look that bad but you wanted comments so you got them.....
Kiyohiko Azuma Mangaka
J.C. Staff Studio
Azumanga Daioh Series
Ayumu Kasuga (Azumanga Daioh) Character
Chiyo Mihama Character
1280x1024 Wallpaper
Artist Comment
this is my first time attempting to make a scenic wall... clearly you can see it wasnt done very well... or artistically.... and in truth... its actually quite plain.... to be honest im quite disappointed with myself.... this had gotta be one of the dodgier ones ive made... and ive made some pretty dodgy ones...... >.<
the pic was a stock image i found zonks ago...
brushes... cant remember where i got them...
special thanks to imanimetion for the tree tutorial... tho it didnt turn out as nicely.... but oh wellz..
ive kinda realised ive never actualli made a wall with girls in it *scratches head* ... somehow for some reason... the subject in my walls has been guys...
anyhow... enjoy [if possible] and plz comment esp on how to improve~!! and whats wrong with it of course... adios~!
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Kiako Apr 14, 2005
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bbls Apr 14, 2005
the theme of your wall is very cute...i think the grass is done very nicely and i like the rainbow in th background. the girls also blend in well with your background. i also think that the tree needs some work, as well, so it matches the realness of your grass, and i, too, saw some lines in the sky area. congrats on making a scenic wall, and thanks for sharing :)
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fullmetal-no-tenshi Apr 14, 2005
Wow, this is plain for you? o__o I think it's beautiful! That could be just me because I can't do much of anything >< But really, I like it a lot. The rainbow is really something. Though I really don't like Azumanga Daioh... the scenic background is very pretty... to me. XD Great work!
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kara Apr 15, 2005
Wheee Snuffles-chan! Congrats on your first scenic wallpaper! I think it's pwetty^^ Wah... you do nice grass @_@ But I think the tree trunk need more texture... cause it doesn't really fit in with the rest of the wall. Hmm... what else what else... I think the overall colour of the wall should be brighter to go with the atmosphere.
Omg.... up till 3 in the morning? bad snuffles so that's what you've been doing up so late. Tsk tsk. But great work anyway^^ -
delusioned Apr 15, 2005
Quote by snuffythis had gotta be one of the dodgier ones ive made... and ive made some pretty dodgy ones
I actually think this is one of your better ones ..but eh ... each to their own opinion I guess.
LOL, it's kinda ironic in a way cause I was thinking of doing an Azumanga Daioh wallpaper the other night ... but I succumbed to watching anime instead of Photoshop :P Anyways. comments. Right.
I personally think that either you should've made the tone of the grass a bit darker to match with the shade of the tree, or use lighter greens in the tree to compliment the grass. I also agree with what everybody else is saying - the tree needs more texture. Good job on the grass though.
I also like the clouds (are lines meant to be there ... ?) and the rainbow - pretty ... and your extraction of images is getting better with each wallie! As for the 'Friends to the end' ... maybe you could add more text to it or do something to make it more ... eye-catching ... it seems like such a lonely sentence (I have no idea what I mean by the last sentence, ignore it.)
Overall, great work! *thumbs up back at you*
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kuroimisa Retired Moderator Apr 15, 2005
Heee... you can be my senpai from now on (not that I'm older than you XD)
The only tiny little problem I have with this wall is how these Azumanga characters are... in... a grassy field...? Lol... I just didn't think they went together... but you made it fit... (^_~) -
irian Apr 19, 2005
It could use a bit more shading to make it more realistic, however, it's a very nice first scenic wall. The rainbow is super cute!
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KyoFan368 Apr 21, 2005
Hey great wallpaper you never stop disapointing.^__^ :) :D :pacman:
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eonir Mar 16, 2006
A motion blur would be nice....
Then this would look like a "last photo" .... but still, looks sweet :-)
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