me thinks her legs are too small T__T;

but i love her expression <3 and her hair its ok to monochrome it, it looks good.

wow... you drew that? O_O
it looks beautiful and the monochrome effect looks awesome.
it looks absolutely pretty. i luv it. great job! *fav*

Wow so great ! Very very nice !

Kool.... another submission from you again
Everything looks so Awesome
Especially the chrome colour
Thanx for sharing

great! woow O_o i thought first it's a scan! omg! thx for sharing!

Ooh, the girl's so cute and the colour's so soft. ^-^ 0 credits to download. Yay~~ =D
Can I use it for some layouts outside MT? I'll credit you properly. ^_^

wow
i love it the colours and the chara and everything it looks so good ok it looks perfect

Wowie! Its sooooooooooo wonderful and lovely! Its so peaceful and serene and the girl is cute! Good job!

Ahh what a cutie girl. Love the expression you drew up - it`s so lovely.

Like her hair and top too. <33 it, it`s great work. X3

Another wonderful work from you Rythem! I love the tones and the character is perfect. Keep it up!

what should i say.. it looks perfect to me.. i love the few colours you used they "give" the pic a special atmosphere.. nyaa.. and it looks like an old photo..

Very beautiful piece of work the background seems a bit plain, but other than that, I like it alot ^^ Keep up the nice work

Damn that's beautiful. I always love your doujinshis, and this one's awesome. You did a great job on the character, and the monochrome fits the mood conveyed perfectly!

Geez! WHaa? Tats so aweseom! How tthe?
Its very good indeed! I envy u!

Simply amazing for a Doujinshi, added to my favorites right away. One of the best I have ever seen.

Oh hello... this looks very nice... how can you do that? I am drawing myself, very often not anime/manga characters but I am just starting to work on my drawings with Photoshop or Illustrator. I wish I could create such effects... It looks so soft... how did you do that? *lol* Well keep up the good work, I really don't know any criticism for it! Well done...

it looks a little different from you nomally send.. but it's interesting no doubt.

the outlines looks thin compared to your doujinshi collection. yet the shades are so exact. i love the sepia tone you used. continue to make more!

look soft, i want to cuddle her, .....zzzzz

wow! is this really a drawing? ^_____^ so goood! great work!

quite a nice work
I love the hair and the clothes' design~ simple but yeh!
the background is beautiful too ^^
the fingers look relatively amazingly.. the eyes too =p *goes speedy with it* (I only know how to spot good and bad now and not really give constructive enough comments :X)

but theres some things that I find weird~
1. the bird's eye~ lol I am not exactly used to it :X
2. the girl's legs look tiny for some reason hehe
3. the nose seems a bit out of place.. making the position of the eyes relatively unrealistic~

but nonetheless its a great work~ keep drawing and drawing~ I want to draw as good as you and others in the future X_X maybe I should practice drawing several characters with your style after my exams! ^^

wow!
you really did a good job on this pic!
i like its color texture.
plz continue the good work!
(>_<)(*_*)(@_@)

I really love it, it's so cute god...
really really beautiful!

I love it ^^ nice lines

I'm so behind on my notifications u_u;;

This is simply lovely, rythem-chan, as everyone has been telling you already <3 The monochrome creates such a nice nostalgic atmosphere...

Like lunaregina pointed out, the bird could be better defined but right now I really like how it looks like a sweet fuzzy... non-bird creature

Wonderful work with your doujinshi, as always <3