this is very good, i need to work hard on my drawing skill so i can become better

Yo dude , It"s cute but i can't put it in?

its rilly good
i rilly like the wingsl

Ah .. it IS a piece of doujinshi no? @___@;; why is it in the female scans category?

Anyhow, I like the outfit a lot - cut and trims are nice. Huh I think you ought to have shaded in some sections of it to balance it out with the wings. X3 But I like everything else.

Great job HOLIC. It`s pretty and creative. <3

So cool!You can draw pretty well ^__^ I really like those unusual wings tough it would be difficult to fly with them...lol
Pretty dress you've done
I wonder where do you get so much imagination to draw like that ^^

OMG ! It look so cool and beautiful ! Like the dress a lots and the wing look awesome ! You draw it so well ! I love it !

nice drawing, the ideea for the charas wings is good. and i also like her clothes. keep it up

Pretty line art....T-T I like it! You should color it! then it'd be really pretty!

wow
what an lovely doujinshi i realy love the charas dress and the hair cut is fiting to the charas expresion and the wings there are realy great

The wings are veryyy interesting! It looks like it says something but i can't make it out. If it doesn't its great that it looks like that. Her outfit and hair and all that stuff really ties in nicely. Nice work you have here

This is really beautiful! I like the nice bold lines, it makes for a very clean looking image. The lady is gorgeous, a really nice character design. Her ensamble is very detailed and the wings are awsome. All the little details are what make this piece so wonderful. Exellent work, thanks for sharing it! ^_~

Wow, beautiful drawing! The clothing is nicely detailed too! Is the wings supoposed to have writing on it? I can't really read it ><

Wow this is very good. The girl looks beautiful and I like the way her hair come in
front of her eye. The wings look great and have that cool pointy effect. Her dress
has really cool designs. It reminds me of a manga called Princess Ai. It's a really
cool book and the outfits have a lot of detail. You should read the manga, in fact there's a group called Princess Ai here at MT. Come check it out sometime.

Ja ne ^_^

Hey a really beautiful drawing. It has a lot of detail. You're inking is very good too. So consistent. Keep it up.

it's awsome!

The image is very good, very good drawing bro. I really like it!

Great character design! I always have a soft spot in my heart for line art and this is an excellent example of why I like it so much.

The wings almost look like they spell something. The black stands out so well and really draws attention to the wings. I love the outfit, and the HAIR! I wish I could get mine to do something like that...

This is fantastic!

o_O Amazing! However, those black torn wings don't match very well with the rest of the girl, whose body, eyes, hair and clothes are just outlined, with no volume and shadows, just outlines... But it's a wonderful picture, I really love it! ^_^

very original idea with the wings - though they might be a little too bold compared to the thinner lines of the girl? either way, i love them. the dress is beautiful and very creative, especially with the sleeves. amazing work and design!

Hey! Nice work, very clean and detailed.
And i agree with u guys, the outfit is great, lots of details in it.
Thanks for sharing, keep it up!

wow O_O this is awesome. i love the wings...and the dress the way it flows plus the hidden figure in the design. it miraculous great work ^^
aloha cant wait for the next one

It's really good. The face, outfit, wings...
Even I can't find something to pick on
That's a fav from me.

wow...that's nice ^^ I like it.

there's nothing to say bout it ^^ love it a lot

I like this art, I like everything of it exept the way you scaned it & uploaded
It's awful! Scan is tooooo big therefor it's hard to view details. it would be great if you decrease its size in future & scan your artworks in RGB-settings, not Grayscale or Black-White. You can change color settings at any time in PhotoShop.