Very nice. It's awesome how you got into the details. Hey face is cute, her legs are soft, and her hair is soft. I would give this a 10 out of 10. You'd be a good artist for doujin.

Omg, omg! Rythem, this is awesome You are totally a fantastic artist. I love the way you made such a clean sketch! How big of paper did you use to draw the pic? It is very beautiful. Ack, how do I add to favs or highlight or whatever they use now? I am so confused about Minitokyo...T_T

nice drawing it looks really good I like the way you did the colors

Yeahhh... this drawing is so cuuuteee, very nice i love this one!

Ooh, it's very cute and original! Feel like hugging him. x-x
Hat is not weird. *wags finger* It's very creative and I would love to see him in some anime slouching away. (He looks slouchy :p) AND, I love the way you colour him, it looks very nice. Cool design! Keep up the good work!

hey awesome drawing my dear friend, I love her expression and the colors selection, absolutely this is master piece

it's awesome drawed.
I could never draw like that with that color comlination.
Especilly the heir and eyes. it's really cute. ^^

Absolutely beautiful! ^^ I love how you drew this, so much detail, it's awesome.
And I love your idea of the mix of colors you used! It is so pretty, I love the degradation of the colors.
Beautiful combination! I think you did a great job, keep it up!

oh my
you certainly got style, lol
great drawing, can't wait till i see more

O_O Wow...... rythem-chan, you're practically professional! The lines and details in this are fantastic I adore the hat. The hair looks a little messy, but it adds to the character design. Neat colors. Yet another amazing doujinshi! *hugs rythem-chan *

wow! i really like this drawing! the colors are really nice! i luv her eyes! FAV++

it is soo lovely! I really lub the drawing, colors, and TEH EYES~~
such lovely work~ and the details are outstanding. want to add to faves.. but mt is blocking it ;; well .. keep up the GREAT work. ^__^
-gracie-chan

sorry for commenting so late.

great doujinshi style! it looks like a very rough pencil sketch with a butt load of crazy colors. very cool. and just to put as a side note: i want a hat like that.

Oh I like the color scheme. *big fan of purple/pinkishness*

I like the detail. The eyes really talk.

Nice work. ^_^

Hmm, totemo sugoi desu.

The eyes really talk. Keep up the good work.

Stupid Error, made me double post. Gomen.

It's wonderful! Congratulations! The colours are so beautiful!

ooh amazing pencil sketching~ a lot of details are all there
I love her clothes and hair those lines look fantastic.. the hat like you said.. weird design =p I wonder how such a hat would look like worn in real life~

ok I don't really know how to complain about it.. only have words of compliment (thats usually what happens to me when you draw cute girls.. and I love pencil art so I rarely complain for them )
I think a fav would do more than enough justice.. wonder if it does anything to credits.. I need more credits if I am going to be so inactive :X

woah! awesome drawing!
I just love the eyes, they're so detailed and pretty *__*
And the folds and clothes are inredibly great!
It's a beautiful drawing!

that is such a cool pic. good job!
i love the colors you used.

Oh wowies! I definitely love this really beautiful drawing! The colours are so pretty! And the hat is so cool, nya~! Her hair and eyes are really nicely done! Love it! Awesome drawing as usual, rythem-chan!

The drawing is really really nice! Is it done by pencil?! Surprising! The color and the image itself are very good! Beautiful! Hope to see your next work:)

Very kawaii! ^___________^
Good work! ^^
I liked! ^^
Kiss! ^^

Wow. Excellent detail, I like the color effect... and the expression of both her face and posture is so incredible. It's a favorite!

i'm so amazed that i want to cry out loud... your artwork is simply beautiful. and the colors too, i just love the great simplicity, just the lines are colored. and of course, it's not a weird hat, it's a nice hat.

Waaahhh... this is drawn with pencil and editten in PS7? O.O Can't believe it... coz it looks too pretty to be true~

Nice hat design. And I love all those details in the clothing, not to mention the shading... I can't help "whoaing" coz it's really sooo good~ ^^

You sure have mastered well with the pencil. Sugoi~