Very nice doujinshi,HOLIC! The angel looks really pretty! Awesome job!

amazing work... I leve what U've done with the wings, and the detail of the ring hanging from them is tight, but the clothing is kinda comfusing...
anyways... looking hot
great work

Nice drawing! The detail and folds on the clothing are realistic. I heard that drawing folds in clothing is hard but this looks really nice. Good job ^^

Great drawing. I like the detail in the clothing with the folds
Also, the design and detail of the wings is good.

wow!
cool doujinshii!!
T_T i want my scanner back!!T_T
hey! u're good drawing!1
keep it up!

bye bye!

Nice! I really like the composition on this one! Thanks for sharing ^u^

beautiful doujin HOLIC-san! i love the wings and her outfit is so detailed! great job and thanks for sharing!

I love this dain. Its even nicer hen looked at a lager vesion!!!!! Bravo!!!!!!!!!

oh wow the Angel Butterfly is so cute and lovely too. I like her interesting outfit so much and her hairstyle is great. You have a super talent for details and thank you so much for the beautiful drawing. Plase draw more for us

Aw. Great drawing. :3 outfit and wings are prettee - for sure.
Her figure looks right. ^__^ It's very good - I like.

It's awesome, it's very detailed and beautifully drawn ^^

This is amazing.
I love butterflies so I like this pic.
Great work!

beautiful. the wings have a mechanical look about them and i love her outfit. it almost reminds me of Card Captor Sakura, one of the Clow cards I think. nice job!

oh wow this is gorgeous!! i can tell that you have put alot of effort into it, and i cant see anything wrong with it at all! if i may make a suggestion...try and use a draker shade of pencil...it will just make your lines stand out that much more. good job!

Very good. Love the details, clothing, drape,body, everything =)

Wow, it's very pretty, and it has a great design. She looks like a butterfly/angel. Great combination. Keep up the good work!

Ja ne ^_^

Very nice drawing. You did spent a hard time to finish this amazing doujinshi. Your character is very pretty. I really like it. Keep up the good work!

i totally agree with the rest. this is absolutely incredible. especially when i download the full version. it looks amazing. lines are very nice and clean.
your character looks very beautiful and very graceful!
she looks like a very gentle character
keep it up! awesome job!

Nice drawing and awesome !! I like it so much !!! I like the dress !! Thank for sharing !!

hum don't want to break the flaw, but the first thing that comes to my mind is *whoa nice drawing* (usual comment lol), and then "the arm that's holding the light sphere is kinda mishaped, it's got a very weird angle at the elbow and the wrist .
anyway the level of detail is amazing, especially a lot of work on the hair and clothes. i like the mix of 'mecha-like' wings with butterfly ones, it's a good concept. the shading on her back foot is weird though.

good drawing, inking it would make it even better XP

How can i sai that it isn't a good work??
It is great! + a fav. from me

the design is good, i like it, the expression of happiness in her face looks great and the stance and magic around her are good too, hehehe, if it would be colored it could look even better =P

what a nice pict!!
i really like it, her face is so cute and the drawing looks perfect!!

wowie holic thats amazing work!!! very nice job with the wings and the angels figure. keep it up u rock!! <(^_^)>