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Original Doujinshi

Uhh... cute?

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Uhh... cute?

By AyameSeishiro

 Original Doujinsh
© 2005 - 2008 ~ AyameSeishiro

AyameSeishiro
 
Submitted:
3y 1wk ago by AyameSeishiro
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
793x996
Size:
111 kB
Views/Downloads:
202/9
Comments/Favorites:
12/1

Dunno, I just made this one again to make up for my loss. But hope you'll like it, I didn't put up much effort to it but i think it's nice.


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for the characters, they are cute, when you have tme, try to color it. keep it up!

nice sketch ate aica...
suggestions:
1. try to put some highlights and shadings if you don't have any plan to color it. . .
2. if you plan to color it, put some lively color for the chracters...

comments:
1. there is something wrong about the bench. . . try to look for the perspective and you'll know what i mean... hehe


sorry for my comments and suggestions... i didn't mean to hurt your feelings or someyhing. . .

nicE one.. :D ^_^ bEri2 nice.. :P ^_^ kaWaii~! :D yOur'e good huh.. :D ^_^

wow the two characters are a very cute couple and I like the eyes of them. The outfits are great and thank you very much for it ^^

i like the charas eyes and the idea
you missed the seat
hope to see more

Pretty cute, but the eyes seem a little too...emphasized. And shijiroken was right by saying the bench was a bit off...it seems like it's folding in. Anyway, the characters are cute, and you should totally color this one!

My sis did it again...

Nice sketch and I think it's weird cuz' the bench as they stated above was a little bit off and the eyes. Too powerful...

It looks like some Dexter's Lab anime parody...

Hey it's cool... need a little color to give it more life, though.

its really really really cute. i like its simplicity and the bench is sort of 3 dimensional making it more fascinating to look at. the characters as i have said are cute cute cute. yeah add more colors to make it lively and i mean dark color for emphasis.

uh huh.. cute indeed :D
but the girl's a little weird..
and their hands..
the guy's shirt's a lil weird..i mean the part around his right arm.
nothing wrong with the neck this time~well at least,to me :D

Awww, it's soooo cute ^uu^ !!! Needs some detailing though. The kids look alittle weird, think it is the eyes, they look hypnotic and alittle creepy to me. Oh, and like somone pointed out, the bench does seem to be awkward. Other than that, I think the sketch looks great , and they are sooo cuuute XD *hugglez them*

yeah it is cute. It would be more lively if u add some color to it still it's a great drawing.

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