Looks great! Nice job with the pose. Ingram's arm/hand look a little small, or low on the shoulder. But that's a small thing! =^_^=

Your idea of shading perspective is pretty good, and I like the hues and tone variations. I also like the hairstyles.

Your proportioning could use some work, and I think the guy's nose and facial features are a bit misplaced. I think the guy's hands are a tad too small as well, and their legs also look a little bit strange. Their eyes also seem a bit too...square?

Nice work, keep it up.
I do hope your comic book comes along nicely.

you draw really well! nice shading and i like the eyes. the proportion on the guy's shoulder has already been mentioned, but overall, it's great!

well, well, well how nice. the title is just perfect and the characters are so sweet. i like it very much friend. the shadings and the outlines are perfect and the eyes are really fascinating. gee i really like them all. how nice!

Awww, this is so cute! You draw so well. I agree, the shoulder looks a little strange, but otherwise, ti is a very pretty drawing. Good shading too. +fav

Nice very it's really something. You have done well. I like that you make it black and white not in colours. Keep up to good work.

very nice drawing, i can never draw a couple. maybe the paper does not fit, iono. >.> anyways yar, like the pencil drawing. excelent.

Uyyyyy... si Ingram at sino yan?

Sinisinta mo? Anyways, nice drawing... I feel envious...

astig ka rin po pala sa drawing eh... keep up the good work!!! goodluck with everything!

Quote by AkaikenUyyyyy... si Ingram at sino yan?
Sinisinta mo? Anyways, nice drawing... I feel envious...

ayus 'to ah! merong bagong issue sa buhay ni kuya darkingram... hehe...

Cute ^^ sana kasing galing din kitang magdrawing... wait... GF mo ba yan na drinaw mo anime style? ^^

nice doujin, maybe hand and leg need to be fix (only my opinion) .
good job otherwise. keep it up!

wow this is really a very beautiful wallpaper, the girl is kinda cute too

nice drawing! i wish i could draw like u! /pif /sob

The girl's arms need to be softened a little bit (a little less muscle) and the slight bit of proportioning. Other than that, it's a great picture. Keep up the good work .

shading and higlights are good but not enought details... I think...
comments and suggestions...
-di po gaano maganda ang pagkakagawa sa kamay ng lalake at binti ng babae...
-masyado po maliit ung braso hanggang kamay ng llake
-napalaki naman po ung binti ng babae, siguro po kung meroon po ikaw na ginawang mas detailed na shading sa binti bka po medyo maremedyohan pa po kuya...
-ikalat mo po ung shading mo po kuya para di po nakikita ugn mga linya sa shading mo po...

NOTE:
pasensya na po sa aking mga pinagsasabi... gomenasai...

Kung alam mo lang Nanami na...

Quote by Nanami11nice doujin, maybe hand and leg need to be fix (only my opinion) .
good job otherwise. keep it up!

cool!

this is soo cool!?

di ko laam marunong karin palang ng drawing!

marunong rin ako!

Nice drawing. The pose is nice, and the people are a cute couple.
I think the shading is very well done, as is the lighting. Very well done.
The details are nice, but there could be a little bit more in the details. Overall, you did a great job.

Pretty good.
I have some tips for you. I think the boy have a problem in his shoulder, and the girl's a bit muscular. Other than that, nice.
Good work.

indeed you are talented...you really have it in you....i also share the same ambishion
as you,i desire to some day create my own manga.
i'm actually working on some....but my art work is not as close to yours....
you are really good...