Hey this is not bad at all! I especially like the eyes. Did you use 8b pencils or just shaded very hard for the lashes? The pose is pretty too. But then while the pic looks very nice in the thumbnail, when I took a closer look, the hair isn't shaded as good as it could have been. Try varying the strokes so that it will look like there is a gradient. I mean, like, getting lighter to dark. Otherwise the outlines for the hair are nice and smooth. Lace could have been better too but, hey, I'm fussy and I still find your pic nice. ^.^ If you come to my userpage and see no penciled doujinshi and want to start complaining that a noob is giving you advice, well, I do not have a scanner so I cannot get my pics in yet. But I do draw quite regularly. And I AM a newbie, sort of. Haha. Well, keep working on it!
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I love it! Really love the eyes! Now all you just need is to just improve on alittle bit of proportions. Love the clothing and the face, its all great and very cute. It looks just so adorable!
You should also add more description to what you did for your sketches, all of us are quite curious about some of your sketches, like what you used, inspiration and such. Its a really nice sketch, and I'm even more anxious to see more of your sketches!

A 10!