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Touka Gettan Anime Wallpapers

Among the sakura trees

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Among the sakura trees

By YoruAngel866

Carnelian Touka Gettan Anime Wallpaper
© 2008 ~ Carnelian & YoruAngel866

YoruAngel866
 
Submitted:
23wk 1d ago by YoruAngel866
Category:
Touka Gettan
Official Creator:
Carnelian
Type:
Anime Wallpapers
Resolution:
2,048x1,536
Size:
1,625 kB
Views/Downloads:
1,349/262
Comments/Favorites:
14/53

PLEASE FULL VIEW TO SEE DETAILES!

Dedicated to yamionpu and pandemonium91

Here is my long awaited vector....

well lets just say i decided to finish my vectors( i already have finished one gintama and one code geass and you can see it on my userpage) and i didnt want to finish this one so soon, but something got me...and i finished it

VECTOR 33
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About vector:
dificullty: hard 9/10
my opinion: One of my best works. Sakura outlines arent straight as momoka's but i wanted it to be like that. i concetrated more on momoka and this is how it turned out,and i sure like it. I added some gradient on linear light and i got this. I decided to leave it and if someone wants normal version,pm me.
P.s. i'm proud :nya:
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Layers :41
time: Around 10 h
funiest part:eyes
hardest part:hair
easiest part: branches
program: Photoshop cs2
psd file size:33
Scan:here(scan by Scampi
groups:
vector-wallers vectory colorfull-wallies celestial-luminesse dream-wallies free--wallers timeless--rain carnelian-sworld
PLEASE FAVE AND COMMENT


EDIT: Corrected mistakes abul mentioned, except for the lines on sakura,but like i said i wanted to leave it like that. but i'll correct it...later


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You dedicated this to me?! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
It looks gorgeous, I love the vectors :) I know how difficult vectoring flowers is (I'm working on a project with flowers myself), so I say they're really worth the effort because they're beautiful!
You get extra points for the alternative colors :D
+fave, and please don't be mad at me for being lazy and not finishing the vector that fast ;_; I'm working on it!

Wow nice vectoring! XD
It would take me a lot of time vectoring things hehe still a newbie in adobe illustrator... :D

  • abul
  • Mute Member
  • 23wk 1d ago

if u dont want to get mad and sad dont read the spoiler

Spoiler:

the lines are quite ugly, theyre squared in the ends and they dont cross each other whic makes it look so weird
momoka's eyes look very bad [not the colouring but the black part] theyre too round but at the same time they're angular, i have no idea how u did this
the parts where one shadow covers more than one colour, like momoka's sleeve, look like they're pieces of completely different images
some colours go out of the line which is weird too
i like the colours though
i understood whats your problem - u dont put effort
as u say, ur vectoring just to be the first person to vector that image
but for example me, or ashy-chan or many other vectorers, do it to make it perfect
we spend a lot of time in photoshop and maybe we could make it faster, but we're working on it until we understand that it looks at least as good as the scan
ur rush reflects on your vectors, that's why they dont lok as good as they could be
i hope one day you'll make a vector not just to be the first one, but to make it perfect :)

wow!this looks great!ok the outlines are not perfect but mine are not better -.-'
so this vector is beautiful!thank you for the good work!
+fav

The lines... they looked rushed :\

The flowers should be soft, like the lines you
made make them look so sharp and glass like actually.
The whole vector looks sharp to me really...can't think of how to
say it but this one is not your best.

I shall be honest to the bone, but will see both sides:
Good Points:
The gradient usage is really good ad the colours are lively so good job on that...
Weak Points:
Unfotunately the lineart seems a bit jagged
You rushed while doing this so it show on the colours - there are parts where the colour doesn't reach the lineart so there are little gaps, unfortunately rather visible.

I know how hard it is to vector Carnelian so kudos on making this, but I think you should slow down... It's better to make a vector and then leave it for two days before uploading (especially when it's as hard as this kind of difficult vector) and not look at it for those two days and then open the file just before submitting - you will look at your work with a fresh eye and you shall noticed little things you overlooked, and thanks to that the works will be free of small errors XD
I have nothing against the sakuras - they look okay XD

I hope you'll not get too frustrated over this kind of comment, but I just know you can do much better! I've seen you do it!

Cute! I love Momoka. She looks is so beautiful! Great job Yoru-chan! :)

When I saw this scan I was like "Wah! Beautiful!" And when I saw you were vectoring it I was like "Wah! Even better!" This image is even the wallpaper for my MP3 player right now; so pretty ^^
I actually like how you vectored the sakuras the most; they turned out really pretty with the coloured outlines.
Momoka looks so cute (love her expression!). The outlines look a bit rushed though, there are some places where they don't meet and other places where they overlap (like near her ear). But things like that can be fixed easily.
Overall it's really pretty! (Gosh, how many times have I used "pretty"?) Nice job :)

Wow everything is nice here, it would be possible to post the clean version? <3 You are trying to use the same technique qe me, but what "ideal" is not trying to -fill path- with -stroke path- (abul said) or try to maintain the thickness of the lines :D Besides, Do not rush to finish a vector! Vectoring is at the pleasure and fun ^^

well I like your vector :D
but the black outlines are a bit messy & really needs more work ^_^' sorry -_-
other than that its gorgeous :)
well done girl ;)

ajme sorry sto sam tek sad promijetila!
jako mi se svida! vektor je predivan! <3

Loved the coloring and the lightening~ >w<
Good work on the sakuras, they look so soft~ :D
Though the lined in momoka could have been softer~ >u<
Either way, great work! :)

I love it^^ The vector is so cute!

it's okay... faves!

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