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Original Doujinshi

orange thingy with gilrl and stuff...like that you know

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orange thingy with gilrl and stuff...like that you know

By yoshimitsu

 Original Doujinsh
This item is in the elite gallery. © 2007 - 2008 ~ yoshimitsu

yoshimitsu
 
Submitted:
33wk 4d ago by yoshimitsu
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
2,196x1,700
Size:
1,028 kB
Views/Downloads:
399/27
Comments/Favorites:
8/18

ah crap i didnt get to read the comments last tym i submited dis.
anywy i dcided 2 post dis again w/o d yellow thing hope it posts

pls comment (dat phrase seems 2 jinks me coz nobody comments wen i say dat)


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the title sucks man

Wow, looks great yoshimitsu! (Much better than the other one... ;)) Love all of the different types of shading that you did, as well as the monochrome. However, with all of the details the character does seem to blend in. I think if you made the background behind the character (by the dotted leaves) solid, it would really make the character stand out more. But overall, an impressive work of art. Keep it up! (And congrats on becoming an animation student!)

looks great - ^_^ so much better without that yellow border - it looks like you put in a lot of effort and it shows - keep it up

IMO, this one deserves a win.
Hmm... reminds me, when was the last time I drew a detailed one? Oh yeah... on that newspaper... yeah, then I... oh, sorry, talkin` to myself XD

The title sucks, yeah.
The artwork rocks.
However, 03x1047 is right. Try to be more creative on the words. ^___~
Anyways, you should have made the girl look in front, since the rest of the work is focused on a frontal camera view. Other than that, go find a studio and work there. I guarantee that you'll sharpen thy skills even better in a studio. ^o^

oh wow... the details are pretty amazing..
what did you used to draw this btw.. it looks as though you used some sort of markers..

  • abul
  • Mute Member
  • 32wk 6d ago

overdetailed, and looks like 1 big orange spot, srsly

I love it. I think that it's great how the seems to be a part of the scenery. The focal point isn't the girl; you're supposed to look at the entire picture. Well, that at least how I see it. The only problem I have with it is the color... ughh, I hate orange... *blech!*

Quote by 03x1047the title sucks man


XD What are you talking about, the title rocks! It perfectly describes the picture :nya:.

This is quite nice! I like the different pen strokes you used; very creative. Good work!

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