Nice wall
This is pretty good for your first wall
keep it up

Not a bad first submission at all. Your drawing skills are very promising (and definitely better than my own ). I believe, it would have been much better if you kept the bg simple without any of those brushes. They tend to divert attention away from the actual artwork. However, your outlines are quite well done, and the small areas that you have added colour to, also look great. I look forward to your other works.

i like ur style. goodjob on the outfit. the pose suits the char very well. one point that i'll like to point out though; her left hip looks abit weird.. i think i'll look better if u curve in abit more, giving her a slimmer waistline.

i like the barbed wire its a nice touch,and her dress is nice

I like the use of black and white to accent the red coloring. This is very beautiful.

Nice first submission kied. The character is quite fashionable-- nice job on her design. The background is just okay for me... it doesn't seem overly cluttered. But I think it would have been nicer if some of the background had been hand-drawn. I also like your dramatic color scheme. The red really pops against the black and white and helps to draw attention to your character. Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing your future submissions.

i think that looks really cool. I like the lack of colors and the splashed of red ^^

Lovely. You draw really well. I don't think anything is wrong with the pose at all.

The work is very good, the details are very interesting, even the composition is impressive. The only bad, is the image is very small for use in a background.