That's a pretty nice drawing. Maybe it would need a bit of cleaning, but otherwise i like your sharp lines. Nice job on the staff, and your characters look good as well (they're kinda cute), though there is a lack of shading i think (except if you plan on coloring it, which would be nice ^_^).

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Might need some cleaning but I like sketchy drawings... sometimes adds some life into it.
Although you would need shadows to go with it. The male looks relaxed but the girl looks a bit rigid, stiff etc.
I think it shows on the face because her eyebrows are too high up whereas the male has his eyebrows lol, showing that he's relaxed.
You have a very good idea here, with the positioning etc, but I don't think the sword behind is necessary for this scene in oppinion :P

Tio hay que ver lo bien que dibujas, ya me gustaria a mi hacerlo asi, esta de lujo, muy bueno
adeu siau

this is very good! after a few more practice you'd be able to draw single fluid lines! gj!