Original Doujinshi
Redheaded
Redheaded
By Melanin
- Submitted:
- 1y 27wk ago by Melanin
- Category:
- Original
- Official Creator:
- Type:
- Doujinshi
- Resolution:
- 876x1,165
- Size:
- 544 kB
- Views/Downloads:
- 255/15
- Comments/Favorites:
- 8/5
This is my first crayon picture. I made it for this site specially. I can't say it was too easy for me, because I hadn't practice for a very long time. It took me entire 7 days to complete this drawing. The character from the picture has a real prototype from my past. I called her "Fly" (this ia a translation of the prototype's last name). Your opinion is very important to me.
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overall, very cool. things get a bit out-of-proportion as we progress down her body/the page (her head/shoulders/breasts area being too large for the frame) but the shading is done quite well, and the hands/feet look great. the pose is cool too
Yeah the shading and all looks great, but I do agree with shining about the proportions looking off. The realism of her clothes really contrast with the more flat, anime-ish look of her face as well. But overall, nice effort for a first submission
Keep
it up! 
Wow! Amazing shading on her clothes, esp those pants!
I
love the photo-realism in them 
And
lovely details on the hands and feet as well, though her face could use more of
that kind of detail and shading... and like others said, her head is a bit too
big for her body...
I'd love to see more from ya!
Crayon!? Awesome job for your first submission Melanin! I would agree with shining and flyin about the proportions though. However, you did a lovely job on the colors/shading of her clothes. They look so real! I really hope that you will share more of your work with us in the future! I'll look forward to it!
Oh! I expected you to have talent but this is beyond my expectations ^__^
really good job) Can't wait for more)
Hi, love the coloring and shading, keep it up like this
I think the body is slightly thin but with crayon i dun think its removable without leaving bad marks
The jeans i especially love
and to do hands and feet as well as that is juz unbelievable
good work
Love the jeans and the hands. I must say though, it looks like she's in the process of morphing between anime and real life bodies.