I love it! She looks so peacefull and happy! Nice! The birds are well done too!

Ooh, beautiful ^^
lovely shading.
as for the error..
is a leg missing or something?
lol.

Nice! really good job!
I love the birds and cute girl too:)

awww! this is really beautiful! and for a original its kinda detailed.. ehehehe..

beautifull, those details are amazing and the whole picture is so cute! amazing!
+favs

great drawing! good work! looks cute

this is simply a beautiful sketch, very well drawn indeed... ^__^

wow..pretty!

Pretty much all the good things that everyone else has said... ^^ the girl looks great, I love the details in her outfit, and those birds look really nice

Gosh u r such an artist! (they are the worst at picking at their own mistakes...lol) Don't tell people that there's an error in your drawing, that's just asking for trouble (or attention, cuz I looked and couldn't really find one). It would take someone pretty harsh to point out imperfections in someone else's work, unless of course, it's an Art Critic.

Lovely work. *muah*

Really great work (see comments above), but it could use a bit of cleaning. *looking for the mistake*... except for the foot, i don't know (though from her stance, she would have crossed her feet, then it could be hidden by the one in front) .
Great level of detail, and fancy outfit... Kudos for drawing all those feathers !

Oh, mistake : maybe the spear's shadow doesn't extend on the wall, it stops on the dress, and then 'poof', it's not on the wall, though the spear is longer ? (ahah, lil detail)

Cool work dude! Actually, you should colour up Haruko and post here. I bet she'll rock. =X

Wow, that is amazing! The shading is great especially the birds! They look so cute! ^_^ And its really good for being a original aswell!

Cute pic
Nice details and the shading is really good.
The girl is so cute ^.^

........wow.....THIS IS GOOD, the way you drew the birds and feathers with the girl is great, the shading is good too. *lol* random character or not it is still cool, i'm adding this to favourites and about the fatal error*kekeke i'll keep quiet lol*

.......there's a mistake...? i can't seem to find one... maybe it's the foot, but it may be obscured. nice work, quite a lot of details, and the light shading gives it a peaceful look. great work!

I like it, still, I think it could be better if you make the lines darken of another retouch.. but I like it too this way... her eyes are great, but the smile is almost invisible.... the valkyrien smile... (uh) the birds and the shades are the great poin here... she looks great too! nice job!

I CAN CALL YOU MASTER OR PRO! AWW MY GOSH! I've never seen doujinshi sooooo clean and DAM GOOD! I can even draw like that! You have already got a vote from me I wan to see your other doujinshi work! ++FAV!

Is very nice and detailed... I like the skirt better. And I think that the error is somethin to do with the perspective (you can't hold on something like she is holding her staf, and have at the same time your right arm in that position). Her staff should be mor at her side that at her front. Anyway, all the details are cool, and I like it a lot.
Congratulatios!

ooh pretty! I love all the details on her dress and nice shading!

WOW! this is really very good
just like everyone else has said, but honestly it is very good for an original char.

*oh and the "mistake"
i feel kinda bad for pointing it out... but Im pretty sure its the wall. Its angled wrong for her tush to be sitting on. Maybe thats not it and Im just looking at the picture wrong, but if it is, Im sorry for revealing it.

but that doesnt even matter cuz it still looks awesome!

EDIT: now that i look at it again that may be the lip of the wall and not the top of it...
so, sorry for the misguided accusation...